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So in this chapter got some some love and war, so to speak. I'm about leery of where this might go.
did similar - did similarly
two biggest enemy busy - two biggest enemies busy
I saw before the others as a sixth bird we hadn't noticed - Slipped into first person here.
*****
I liked the way this chapter turned out, as well as all the character development.
Some random thoughts I've had while reading:
I've really been hoping for Sweet Bite to be, well, truly sweet, and praise to you for making such endearing characters with less than saintly motives.
You'll hear no complaints from me if this story stays away from dark, jealous, and angst ridden places, but if that's where it's going I'll keep reading anyway.
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In this case the motto seems to be - "Make war, then love."
6967655 Nopony is perfect. Not me and certainly not the changelings in this hive.
Thank you for helping with the typos, as always, we will see they are fed into pods and drained to feed the hive.
What's this? I take a break and miss 30 thousand words? We have some catching up to do, speed writer!
Ch6 Engaged
Both mares were watching now and Sally grinned in a way that felt quite predatory to the her.
to her.
Ch7 Plans
Believe me when I say, if the two of you had a foal I would step give them their own hive just to see the mania she would create."
would give I think, not sure.
I am loving this story! Also loving the story name
7096361 It came to me after David Silver and myself were laughing about how our stories were effectively Pony Soap Opera of the truest sort. Days of Our Lives, Days of Our Hives... seemed a good pun
7096361 Oh my gosh, I am sorry. I didn't realize you were poking edits there. Both fixed!