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6971266 Ha, I have done it, I have reached the point where I can write faster than you can find typos! I win!
became muscles feline - became muscled feline
as was her arms - as were her arms
had become changeling - had become a changeling
that she scooted out - that she could scoot out
cares about get - cared about would get
next time I would - next time, I would
even bring her fangs - even brought her fangs
slow back. - slow back down.
to listed to - to listen to
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The previous chapter was the calm before the storm, it seems.
Sally is racking up more and more complex victories!
The only thing that left me a little confused was that I had no idea they had split the party until after it was revealed that Sharp Mind had been captured. She just kind of disappears in the previous chapter, then reappears here, already captured.
A random thought - Sally has partially taken on the role of stallion in their little herd, and now she carries a sword. Symbolism?
6971418 Thanks again for the typos.
I added a little to the previous chapter to make their split a little more obvious.
As for symbolism...