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6976399 Isn't that what bees do?
left view - left their view
shut is hole - shut his hole
She might be a pompous ass, but she is MY pompous ass. - He might be a pompous ass, but he is MY pompous ass.
was her exacting - was he exacting
what is certainly - what was certainly
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Excellent chapter! The loving relationship between a larger, more powerful Sharp Mind and her two lovers (even if Sweet doesn't make an appearance) is very satisfying reading. You also have raised a very interesting question.
Can the hive make the switch from parasite to symbiote? Perhaps not in a single generation, but once the seed of change is planted...
Also I now understand the physical relationship between the hive and the farm much better, for some reason I had assumed that the hive was entirely above-ground like some massive beehive just plopped out in the forest. But since it is underground it makes it possible to have a town or a small city spring up over it where all the ponies live in harmony with their changeling leaders and protectors.
6977981 Nopony is even really pushing for it. Fangs was just, for all intents and purposes, pushing to 'sustainable farming', but things are drifting more. I would say further but then I could just post another chapter, couldn't I?
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I'm definitely not pushing for spoilers, just putting some thoughts out as they occur to me.
I'm happy to keep reading and hunting for typos to help in any way that I can.
Yes yes, Sally the politician would be fired quite quickly, but her down-to-Earth nature tilted the scales this time.
There really is no way to politely ask sapient creatures to breed more if they're not already doing it...
Keep going! ;)