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Eh, at this point it wouldn't add anything to the story. As she said herself, it was mostly to find out where the line was, and for now that's enough.
It sounds like she's making a good first-iteration A-team, but to what end? Surely they'll move past training and drills and start doing missions?
Keep going! ;)
forming and - forming, and
awake she - awake, she
track Sharp - track, Sharp
she head - she heard
weight baring her - weight bearing her
sounded a impressed - sounded
aimpressed*****
The path that your story is taking continues to pleasantly surprise me.
I hope this new twist to the story does not cause too much friction between Sally and Sharp Mind. Sweet Bite is pretty much a living want-it-need-it spell...
With regards to adult content/sex scenes - I don't mind, and you have handled it tastefully this far. As long as you're happy writing it and it does not interfere with the narrative, you'll hear no complaints from me.
Still, I wonder to what end all this training will come, they are far to the south of Equestria, perhaps they will use their new skills to move against other changeling hives or the griffons.
6965522 Typos enslaved!
In the past, I have written stories that have had no sex, and others that have had it at least one page in four. While this isn't going to be the latter, if I think plot is going to happen (real plot) during such a scene, I will not hesitate from it, then.
Would prefer no sex scenes.