AppleJack knew Flim and Flam were always shady when it came to business. She'd expect no less of them to scam the whole village or lie about a miracle product, but nothing like this. With her trees barren, home ravaged, and her family in shambles, the FlimFlam Brothers were dirtier than she thought. But they messed with the wrong mare. AJ was willing to do anything just to take back what's hers, if not take something from them. This could only end in bloodshed.
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Oh, man. Those jerks are dead meat.
AJ's not gonna show them ANY mercy for killing her brother, taking Apple Bloom and destroying the farm.
Good start to this, btw.
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AWESOME! And a quick message to Flim and Flam. You done goofed!
Um, wow. A bit excessive, Flim and Flam! Shame on you both! They'd better have a damn good reason for this!
And this was very well written. I know it sounds silly, but when I saw the first two sentences began with the correct uses of "it's" and "its", I kind of did a little fist pump and thought "This is gonna be good". And it was. When you say you storyboard your fics, do you mean you actually sit down and draw them all out, panel by panel?
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Thank you so much for your feedback Susie! And yes, that is exactly what I do. For more dedicated stories and ideas that I have, I make it panel by panel, but more often than not I simply right footnotes of a basic idea.
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A big thank you, Geralt of Rivia (I assume that is who you are, hence the name White Wolf).
7334657 Well, you're very welcome, but wrong.
My username is just what it says; "Whitewolf", but without the spaces.
You can just call me Wolf, though. All my online buddies do.
Now watch what you said have gone completely over my head.
*reads back over that last bit, then
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Great. Now I'm channeling Zecora.
Cool. And how the say goes: "blood calls blood!"
And so, it begins the journey!