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With the Empress's fleet came much needed supplies, thousands of tons of food and fuel being ferried down to Rynn’s Word to help the surviving civilian population get back on its feet. With nothing left to fight the Guard and Astartes forces had taken to burning away any remaining Tyranid structures, a thick layer of haze hanging over New Rynn City as countless Tyranids were burned to ash.
Yet despite the carnage, the loss, the people of Rynn’s World were in high spirits.
“- and then the Student spat in the daemon’s face, her very words burning its skin with her purity,” an older gentleman said to a gathered group of small children. “‘Away with your lies, O Daemon! Mine eyes rest upon the Empress, and only by Her Word shall we show fealty’. And with the call of the Student, the Empress came down in a pillar of lightning, striking all of the traitors dumb before She and the Student cast them back into the Immaterium.” All the children gave small gasps of excitement, eagerly hanging to their elder’s words as he continued his story.
None of them noticed Twilight herself passing by, stepping lightly around the celebrating and mourning groups of Guardsmen and civilians. Even with her distinct armor she felt invisible, drifting like a ghost from group to group as she slowly worked her way back to Celestia. She watched and listened, taking in the stories of heroism and terror the humans regaled to one another as they sought to bring some semblance of normality back to Rynn’s World.
Normality had long been absent from Twilight’s life, but there was no need to deny it to others.
Ahead Twilight could see Celestia speaking with Corax and a few of his Raven Guard, the Primarch looking more dour than usual. Even when covered in dust and whatever it was that daemons bled Celestia was still a magnificent sight, her armor shimmering in the evening sun as the wind tugged at her hair. She did not notice Twilight as she approached, keeping her attention on her son while Twilight waited patiently behind her. Finally Corax gave a nod and departed, though he seemed more content to walk rather than fly away with his jump pack. Was it damaged? I didn’t see Corax during the fighting... so maybe?
“Princess?” Twilight asked, rocking on her heels as Celestia turned to face her. “Is now a bad time?”
“Of course not, Twilight,” Celestia said, giving Twilight a smile. “I always have time for you. I have heard much about your defense of the northern half of the city.”
“Oh... really?” Twilight sheepishly massaged the back of her head. “Just trying to do what you taught me to do...”
“And you did so with such skill and enthusiasm,” Celestia stepped forward, kneeling and resting a hand on Twilight’s shoulder. “Truly, I could not be more proud of you than I am now, Twilight. You have come so far in these last few years both in Equestria and here in the Imperium, and you continue to impress me with your skill and knowledge.” Celestia’s smile turned sad. “Unfortunately for me, it has come to the point where you have begun to surpass all that I have left to teach you.”
“But I’ll still be your student, right?” Twilight asked, her hands trembling as she continued on. “I-I really don’t feel prepared for something like that, and I could use all the help I can get especially with all the weird things that keep popping up around here-”
“There is no need to be so concerned, Twilight,” Celestia said, her smile returning in full. “And you may surprise yourself with how prepared you truly are. Even for a universe as chaotic as this one, I have no doubt that you will continue to shine as a leader in these dark times.” Twilight smiled, though it was a rather uneasy smile all things considered. She tried to think of something to say, to assure Celestia that she could keep up and be the woman Celestia thought she was, but the words continued to die in her mouth.
Celestia’s warm smile was all Twilight needed.
“Empress?” Twilight turned, spotting Mattias coming through the crowd. He was alone, his face set in a concerned frown, but nothing else about his demeanor had changed. “May I have a moment of your and Tara’s time?”
“Of course, Mattias,” Celestia said, turning to face Mattias fully. “What may I help you with?” Mattias remained silent, wringing his hands together as he mulled over what to say. Maybe it has something to do with the Eldar? Twilight thought, cursing herself for not bringing this up sooner. The two waited for the Inquisitor to speak, but Mattias said nothing as he looked between Twilight and Celestia. Finally, he sighed.
“I am not sure if Tara told you of this,” he started. “But we were rescued from the fall of the spaceport by a band of Eldar Harlequins.”
“I see,” Celestia said, her face growing stern. “I had suspicions the Eldar had interests in this region of space, but it must be considerable if the Harlequins are willing to get involved...” there was another pause before Celestia spoke again. “Please, continue.”
“They led us through a section of the Webway they called the Path of Memories,” Mattias said. “Apparently, the psychic energies within draw upon the memories of those that pass through them, projecting them for others to witness.” now Mattias looked to Twilight, her heart sinking as his gaze hardened. “I saw a few particular memories about your student... enough to learn that she is not who she says she is.”
... oh no.
“M-m-mattias,” she stammered, shrinking behind Celestia as she continued. “I-I-I didn’t mean to-”
“What do you mean by this, Mattias?” Celestia said, her voice calm. “What crime do you bring against my student?”
“The fact that she is not human,” Mattias said, looking to Celestia. “She is a xenos, a pony by the name of Twilight whom I believe you have mentored since she was a child, in some form or another. I don’t know how she holds the form of a human, but I presume your power is involved in this.” Mattias knew. Mattias knew and all Twilight could do was cower. Celestia would not let her come to harm, but Mattias knew and her presence was not always assured. How long did she have before he tried shooting her? Or would Celestia merely kill him where he stood to keep the secret from getting out... Celestia wouldn’t do that...
Twilight whimpered. Mattias knew, and all she could do was panic.
“... I see.” Celestia replied. “This is a serious accusation you make, Inquisitor. Should rumors such as this persist it could put the stability of the Crusade and the Imperium in jeopardy, and that is a threat I cannot allow.” Twilight felt a brief pulse of magic, watching Celestia’s hand clench ever so slightly. “You seek my judgment, no?”
“As Empress, you are more privy to threats I cannot even comprehend,” Mattias said. “I want to believe that Twilight is not dangerous. I want to believe that she is an ally, that she has our best interest in mind... but she is a xenos, and an alien will always put their own interest before that of Humanity. That has been the reality the Imperium has faced for the last fifteen thousand years.” Mattias’ gaze softened, though his concern did not seem willing to depart. “If I am damned, so be it. I just wish an answer from you, Empress.”
“There are few over the course of my life who have ever demanded answers from me in such a way,” Celestia said, her eyes narrowing. “To put yourself forward and risk my wrath, even with all you believe... That is a trait increasingly rare among Mankind.” Twilight looked between Celestia and Mattias. She found her hands clenching, the urge to rock on her feet rising within her. Defenses, explanations, lectures on the dangers of xenophobia, all blossomed and died in her mind without any useful fruit.
Just more panic. Mattias knows.
“Twilight is not a threat, Mattias,” Celestia continued. “She is my student, and she has always placed the good of others before her own self interest. As of her being a xenos, they were crafted by my hand during my time of exile, and I am quite fond of them as a result.” she raised an eyebrow before continuing. “Is that a satisfactory answer, Inquisitor Velas?”
“... I accept your judgment, Empress.” Mattias closed his eyes. “Do with me as you will.”
“I have no intention of killing you, Mattias,” Celestia said, her hand twitching again as Twilight felt her magic draw back. “You have proven yourself to be a useful and intuitive soldier, and the information you possess is too valuable to risk unwanted attention. This conversation does not leave the three of us until such a time I deem it necessary, and should you willingly leak this information... You will die.” Twilight winced, but said nothing as Celestia’s gaze softened. “I do not mean to be so harsh, but I must if I am to protect all that I love.”
“I understand.” Mattias replied. There was a pause before Celestia smiled.
“Thank you for coming to me with your concerns, Mattias,” she said. “Now, there will be a strategy meeting at 1400 when the Lion arrives. I would like both of you to be there as I have a special task for the two of you in these coming days.” Celestia looked between Twilight and Mattias. “Now Twilight, is there anything you wish to say to Inquisitor Mattias before we must return to our regular duties?”
Twilight swallowed. She wanted to say something, anything, but her words continued to fail her. Mattias’ expression had not changed much, but his body language did appear more open... perhaps he actually wanted to move on and hear what Twilight had to say.
But... he thought I was...
“... three years,” she said, her voice low as she hung her head. “Three years we’ve known each other, struggled together. Three years I thought you were my friend, that I could trust you, and I did trust you...” she looked up at Mattias, a tear forming in her eye. “Three years of trust gone because of one minute of miscommunication?”
“Twilight,” Mattias started. “I know things are different from what you are used to-”
“So? After all we’ve been through, you can’t look past the small fact that I am not a full human?” Twilight took a step towards Mattias, her hands clenching as she bit back her fear, her frustration. “I know how things are here. I know that you and other humans have spent centuries fighting against all manner of horrors and monstrosities. After all that, after all we’ve done, everything you’ve said to me and encouraged me with, after all that you thought I was just like them?!” She trembled, but deep breaths would be enough to keep her calm, for now. Now Mattias took a step back, his face dropping as he tried and failed to meet Twilight’s.
“I-I couldn’t take any risks...” he said.
“So I’m a risk, then? The scared, confused, naive little psyker is as great a risk as a giant hive mind of aliens and a ravenous horde of daemons.” She let out a long sigh, just enough to keep from screaming as she looked away from Mattias. “I thought you were better than Markos, Mattias. I-I... I thought we were friends... Friends trust each other, communicate with each other, they don’t stab each other in the back on a whim...” silence reigned between the two of them, Twilight staring down into the mud as she waited for an answer. It did not matter if it was from Mattias or Celestia, just anyone talking would be fine... at the very least, it could give her someone to vent at.
“I’m...” Mattias said. “I’m... sorry.” Twilight raised her head, looking at Mattias out of the corner of her eye. “I’m sorry that my ‘accusation’ has caused you distress, and... well, it’s probably shot our working relationship to the Warp, all things considered. I wanted to give up on zealotry and caution, really, but... I could not. For that, for not sticking to what truly matters for the Imperium, I am justly blamed.” Twilight turned her head fully towards Mattias.
“I am a soldier of the Imperium, and my duty is to protect it from all possible threats,” Mattias continued. “In seeing you as a threat, especially after all that you’ve done here... I was wrong, and I am sorry.” Mattias closed his eyes. “I pray for your forgiveness.” Twilight blinked, turning more to face Mattias. She fought the dual urges to chew her lip or get back to venting, her hands trembling as she struggled to speak.
That Eldar had spoken at length about what she was willing to give up... perhaps it had challenged Mattias as well.
“... Thank you, Mattias.” she said finally, sighing as tension flowed out of her. “It really means a lot for me... to hear you say that.” Mattias nodded, another pause reigning before he looked to Celestia.
“Empress,” he said. “Are you sure you will be needing my assistance? Battling Chaos is not exactly in my area of focus.”
“I do not need you as a warrior now, Mattias,” Celestia said. “A Guardian of Secrets, perhaps, but not a warrior.” the Inquisitor seemed comfortable with this, if a nervous expression and a flex of his mechanical hand could be seen as “comfortable.”
Twilight said nothing. The revelations of Mattias were still ringing in her head, even if he was willing to let it pass and Celestia was ready to keep it that way. She looked at him, still keeping her eyes averted to avoid direct eye contact, as if she expected to see the same man she had known in days before.
All she saw as an Inquisitor. That, Twilight could not accept.
...
Eldar.
Celestia had wondered when they would begin to make their presence known; they always seemed to stick their noses into her plans, for better or worse. But that was before they had started to seek Twilight out, if Mattias’ comments were any indication.
The Inquisitor was also a problem. A good man, perhaps, but just a man when all was said and done. Keeping him close to Twilight could deter him or others from prying too much, but it was yet another factor that she needed to keep an eye on above all others.
And that was before factoring the Eldar, and their interest in Twilight.
Twilight stood off to her left in the battered amphitheater Celestia had picked for her meeting. She had said little since the meeting with Mattias, shying away from all eye contact as she made herself as unseen as possible. Celestia had hoped for more time to speak to her, to assure her that everything would be alright and get assurance that she would be able to move on, but Twilight would not say anything.
Not that Celestia could blame her. Not with all that had happened.
The object of Twilight’s distress was seated far to Celestia’s right, head down. Celestia did not need a mental probe to sense Mattias’ fear and shame, a constant struggle that rose and fell every time he glanced up at her and Twilight. She would let him have his moment of shame, and then he would need to return to serving the Imperium... all that remained was for Twilight to accept his trust once more.
A shimmer to her right heralded Corax’s arrival, the Primarch stepping out of the shadows before speaking. “The Lion will be here shortly,” he said. “I sense Tara is distressed.”
“Matters have changed, Corax,” Celestia said. “However, it is not my place to say more on the matter.” Corax nodded, turning slightly as he watched the entrance to the amphitheater. As if on cue the Lion appeared, flanked by two champions from among the Dark Angels. He was battered, dried blood caking around deep rends in his armor, but he strode with confidence down the steps towards Celestia, his head held high.
The fact that he was carrying the severed head of a Tyranid Swarmlord probably helped him keep face.
“Jonson,” Celestia said. “I thank you for joining us, and congratulate you on your victory over the Tyranids.”
“Such as it is,” Jonson said, dropping his trophy at Celestia’s feet. “The insect proved difficult, but I managed to strike it down before the rest of the fleet suffered its end.”
“Impressive,” Celestia said, giving Jonson a smile. “I have no doubt there will be greater victories to be had in the coming days.”
“No doubt.” Jonson looked to Celestia’s left, regarding Twilight for a moment. The Lion’s jaw twitched, as if he were about to say something, but the moment passed before he looked back to Celestia. “We are assembled. What is our next objective?”
“That... is a most difficult matter.” Celestia said. She raised her hand, light shimmering around it before her magic constructed an image of the galaxy. “The Hive Fleet is dead, struck down by an enemy I have never faced before. It calls itself the Dark God, and I believe it is a great manifestation of the Ruinous Powers.”
“I traversed the Eye of Terror several times during my exile,” Corax said, frowning. “I have heard no mention of this ‘Dark God’ anywhere.”
“I know,” Celestia replied, looking to her sons. “Which means it is far more ancient than anything I have faced, ancient enough to have been forgotten entirely, or it is a new God of Chaos rising to take the place of the old. Either way, it must be killed.”
“Why have you not done so already?” Jonson asked, folding his arms across his chest. Celestia hesitated, her free hand twitching ever so slightly.
“... I cannot, not yet.” she said. “This creature’s power is in ascendance, drawn by Lorgar’s preaching and sorcery. In time I will be able to challenge it, but we must break its power before it can cause too much damage.” Jonson gave a grunt, but his silence afterward was enough to say he understood.
“With the Hive Fleet struck by this Dark God, no doubt other factions of the traitors will be massing under its banner.” Celestia’s image shifted to a fortress world, a world ringed almost entirely by the Eye of Terror. “Most likely they will breach the Cadian Gate and advance southward for Terra. Your task will be to make sure they do not get there.”
“It sounds like you are resigning Cadia to destruction.” Corax said, frowning. Celestia gave a heavy sigh and dismissed the image.
“I must take in all possibilities, Corax,” she said, hanging her head. “Cadia may stand, or it may fall. We must be prepared for all possible outcomes, no matter how unsavory they may be.” Corax fell silent. Celestia waited for several more moments before speaking again. “If possible, you two are to fortify and hold Cadia at all cost. Should that not be possible, the traitors must be contained within the Segmentum Obscurus. Choke points at Agripinaa, Fenris, and Armageddon should be sufficient for that task.”
“Us?” Jonson asked. “You will not be leading the defense?” Celestia hesitated. A full dossier on the Eldar’s presence would only raise more questions from the Primarchs than she was willing to answer, and with time as narrow as it was they could not waste any with suspicion or questioning.
No... she thought. That is what the old me would have done. I cannot allow my sons to fall to confusion and mistrust again.
“I must return to Terra,” Celestia said finally. “From there, I intend to use the old Webway portal within the Imperial Palace to find the Black Library. There are questions I have concerning our enemy that perhaps only the Eldar can answer.”
“Are you sure bringing the xenos into this matter will be worth it?” Corax asked. “There is little love between us and the Eldar, and bringing them in may only see more of our people killed for their schemes.”
“Rushing forward blind will have a worse result.” Celestia countered. “At the very least, I might be able to convince some of the Eldar we share a common enemy in this Dark God.” there was a pause, Celestia’s gaze drifting until it fell upon Mattias still seated off to the side. “Inquisitor Mattias, you can stop hiding now. I have a task for you and Tara.” there was a pause before the Inquisitor rose and crossed to the others, keeping his head down to avoid eye contact with Celestia or the Primarchs.
“You summoned me, Empress?” Mattias asked.
“I have transferred a special package over to your ship,” Celestia said, giving Mattias a small smile. “You and Tara are to take it to the planet of Solemnace and trade it for the Unbound Flame, which is in the possession of the Lord of Solemnace. When you have collected it, bring it to me on Terra.” Mattias had already started to pale as soon as Celestia had said the word “Solemnace”. He massaged his head, nervously looking between the Primarchs and Celestia as he struggled for the right thing to say.
“Are... are you sure you would not prefer to execute me now?” he asked. Corax and the Lion looked to Celestia, eyebrows raised. ... Please don’t ask me.
“I do not send you to Solemnace to make war, Inquisitor,” she said, turning her focus fully on Mattias. “You are merely there to bargain for the Unbound Flame. With your resources and Tara’s talent for speaking to those who would not otherwise listen to reason, I am sure you shall secure the artifact.” Celestia looked back to Twilight, the girl flinching away as she continued. “Is that something you think you can handle, Tara?”
“Y-y-yes...” Twilight stammered, thumbing the hilt of her sword as she continued. “I think I can...”
“Good. You two will leave immediately.” Twilight swallowed, but nodded and moved to leave as Celestia turned back to the Primarchs. “Now, onto the matter of the next stage of the campaign.”
“A moment, Student,” Jonson said, Twilight stopping and turning towards the Lion. “I heard of your rallying of the city defenders. A little sloppy, perhaps, but you do appear to have some talent for command, even one as small as this.”
“Oh... Thank you, my lord.” Twilight gave a polite nod. The Lion’s jaw twitched, the Primarch falling silent.
“What I suppose I am trying to say,” he continued. “Is that I was... I was not entirely correct about your military skills. The Empress was wise in choosing you for a student.” Celestia blinked but said nothing. The Lion was complimenting a mortal? She could not remember the last time she was witnessed such a sight... then again, she had not seen the Lion in almost five billion years.
“Th-thank you, Lord Jonson.” Twilight said, a small smile flashing across her face. The Lion remained as stern as ever.
“My favor is limited, though,” he said. “You will have to impress me again if you are to keep it.” Twilight gave another shaky nod, stepping further away as she departed. Mattias hesitated, but soon he too left the amphitheater, keeping a fair distance away from Twilight as the two disappeared from sight.
A fracture, perhaps... but then Twilight always seemed adept at handling such matters.
“Empress?” Celestia turned back to Corax and Jonson. “You were going to discuss our reaction to a possible Chaos incursion?”
“Right, of course.” Celestia nodded. “We must not let ourselves get distracted, after all.”
I'm almost surprised that she didn't add "She is my child as much as any of my sons."
First of course is the question: What is Solemnace?
Then I would suggest you format it "all at once". I think what you mean by that is to do it like Tolkien did in the Two Towers were one half of the book is for one group and the other is for the second. It is just how I like to read my stories.
I do have to ask however about the timeline? Three years... I must have forgotten how long some things have taken.
I like how the mistrust between Twilight and Mattias was not resolved immediately. I like it when things have consequences .
Good job overall!
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The timeline is a bit stretchy, mainly for readers' sake because if I were to pace it out event by event, Celestia would just be arriving at Terra. I'm mainly sticking to some of the major events and glossing over parts that aren't too important in the grand scheme of things.
Five billion years? I don't think it's been quite that long since she's seen the Lion.
That aside, I liked this chapter. We got the xenos thing partially resolved, and a lot of cool stuff got set up to happen soon.
While the Tolkien method looks attractive at first, the fact that this is a serialized format makes it tricky. By the time one of the plot threads is realized, most readers will have forgotten what the other branches were meant to be doing. Perhaps small vignettes, glances at the other parts as the story progresses? Just enough to keep the situation fresh in the mind.
I feel sorry for Matthias, his absolute dogma has collided with his moral convictions, and he has no idea how to reconcile the two.
Well, on the plus side we are gona see trollzyn the bloodraven primarch , on the minus side that friendship dialogue betwen the inquisitor and twilight would be fine and all but there is a small detail that you are missing, you wrote yourself, that friends trust each other, yet twilight didnt trust him enough to tell him that she is a xeno, I personally think that she had no right whatsoever to chew him out for getting outrged that she is not human, and I wonder who would your emperor(celestia) chose if it came between humanity or ponies
I think Matthias realised just how far he'd misunderstood the situation when the Empress told him that she knew of Twilight's true nature and that no further action was to be taken.
What is he to say? Tell people that Xenos told him that the Empress's Student and the hero of the recent battle was actually a Xeno infiltrator of some sort? If he was lucky, he'd be put in for a personality-wipe and re-education because he had suffered incapacitating battle stress. At worse he'd be the one executed as a heretic for daring to accuse the Student on the word of some Xeno sorcerers. I strongly suspect that he now thinks he's on death row and waiting for the Empress to order him spaced or something.
However, I think that the real hardest blow for him was Twilight's anger and sense of betrayal that being one of the other children of the Empress was enough to counter-balance all her acts in the service of the Imperium in his mind. That will be a mis-step that he will long regret and that pain will make him more circumspect and thoughtful.
Assuming that he doesn't go full zealot and gets himself killed trying to prove his unquestioning loyalty.
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I suspect that Celestia knows perfectly well that this would only make Twilight's life harder. There'd then be idiots literally prostrating themselves at her feet and it would also make her a prime target for her enemies, both internal and external. She wants to keep Twilight out of the heavy-duty fight in the warp for as long as possible, not paint a target on her back.
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Point of view, it my have only been a few tousend years in 40K, but our dear Emperess did grow a baren rock to suport life and hel evolv said life
the point of sentiens and modern Equestria.
It's dimensional time dilation, don't ask!
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Home of the gratest magpei to exist,
Trazyn the Infinite
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And I dont care what you mortals think.
Long live The Silent King!!!
9313871 Remember all the time she spent forming Equestria from literal dust.
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I mean just this story's timeline. I have not realized it has been three years.
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I did forget about that part taking so long.
Modern folk don't even realize that during the Crusade, The Emperor had no issues with xenos who didn't oppose Humanity's march. There was even something of a working relationship with the Eldar in those days as Mankind re-inherited the Galaxy from them. The Emperor was never about 'kill all xenos', that was simply a blanket order after his ascension to the throne because there was too much Imperium to be truly safeguarded, and individuals had to be wary to not be led astray and do more damage to the Imperium by listening to aliens bearing gifts. Even after Celestia's advent the Imperial Truth doesn't seem to have been spread.
Interestingly enough though, the Empress is going to either peruse the Library or speak with Cegorach directly - perhaps Celestia will try to convene with Ynnead. And now we've got to deal with Trollzyn the Infinite. Things are moving. (Pleased that Lion managed to shift the massive stick up his backside for a moment, too.)
Celestia blinked by said nothing
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That actually went much more smoothly than I expected it to, and it felt very organic in the process. Well done.
Always nice to see Twilight maintaining her trademark humility (even if she unfortunately strays into self-doubt), and Mattias remains a good chap. His question of Celestia during the briefing (and the Primarchs' reactions) were priceless. And, of course, Celestia continues to rule justly. Her ability to acknowledge her own mistakes and do better is what makes the Empress superior to the Emperor, and her honesty with both Primarchs and Mattias is refreshing.
The time has come.
They go to see the Troll God.
Blessed be his rule, may it last forever.
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I swear, if Cadia falls in the next eight or so chapters...
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Hmm Sincerely, I'm not seeing anything really so out, in what Mattias has done... He got information and confirmed them with the highest authority he could reach. He is not saying that she is a menace that MUST be killed. He knows that Celestia knows and is just asking for clarification. I'm quite perplexed by the reaction of everyone, including Twilight... Getting that out in front of the Empress of Mankind is just saying "Look... this is what got out. EVERYTHING that was taught me says that xenos are bad, also it says that everything from the Emperor is good, she is both... I need further instructions. I don't know how to work that out." What would be the acceptable thing to do for Mattias in Twilight opinion?
9315291 It's not his procedural observance that bothers her. Mattias is an Inquisitor of the Ordo Xenos. Twilight has done her homework, she is fully aware of the standard operating procedures of inquisitors of the imperium regarding Xenos, especially disguised Xenos, and it's not pleasant. On top of that, it's obviously thrown a wrench in the way he views her, when she feels she has proven beyond doubt where her loyaltys lay.
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The standard operating procedure is KILL IT WITH FIRE AND EXTREME PREJUDICE. EXACTLY because she knows that she should make some allowance.
Again, WHAT should Mattias have done? Just said nothing, kept going as before and ignore totally this? I REALLY can't figure a NICER way to get this out...
Uuuh...
Don’t let Trazyn find out Tara is an Equestrian. A powerful psyker species from another dimension probably peaks his interest.
The Lion compliments Tara, and apologizes. Will wonders never cease?
I look forward to the continued awkward atmosphere between Twilight and Mattias. It makes for a good laugh, so long as it doesn’t end in someone being purged. Can’t wait till the others here the news. Don’t know how the sisters will handle it, but the Primarchs will probably blow a fuse. Corax might respect her even more, being crafted by Celestia herself, but Jonson will suffer an aneurism, being a Dark Angel.
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Based on her reaction she had hoped that he would let it go, that their relationship would be strong enough to withstand it. That her expectations are not entirely rational is on her.
I don't think he could have handled this better. It's not his fault Twilight has taken it personally. He is doing the best he can.
It is info that could damage the unity of the Imperium if Celestia's dabbling with Xenos becomes common knowledge to the rest of the Inquisition. Especially considering the way she is currently going to consult the Eldar and the emergence of chaos unified. We have already seen inquisitors following their zeal over the empress before, but the fact that he isn't immediately reassigned or vaporized indicates that Celestia trusts him not to.
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That Mattias IS trustworthy is quite clear. And again he did one of the most rational thing... And ALSO he has shown respect for Twilight by NOT going behind her back in talking to the Empress, as THAT would have been the MOST rational thing to do, talking to the Empress ALONE to have orders on what to do with the xeno. The fact that he talked in FRONT of Twilight is proof that he still trust her. It is really the BEST scenario possible. I hope that Twilight manages to think about what else he could and should have done.
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I suspect that's part of why Celestia paired them up for this next bit.
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Oh boy, they are going to the homeworld of a Necron Overlord, Tara and company are going to have to tread very damn lightly. That said, Tara's reaction when she first sees Trayzn will be hilarious.
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Not to metion Tray seeing Tara.
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True, at least he won't be stupid enough to try and add her to his collection, but that's only because Tara is the Empress's student after all. Now that I think about it, he is brutally honest when it comes down to it, I mean he's not a kind fellow by any stretch of the imagination. Now wouldn't that be something.
Also, just how tall is Trayzen anyways?
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I belive the standard worrior is six foot tall, so 7-8ish?
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I don't think so, Necron Immortals are mentioned as being pretty huge.
9315934 It is some time in M45 in the Imperium (confirmed way back in chapter 3 when Sister Bianca introduced Angelique to Markos).
I should really set up a timeline for this story...
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Yeah a timeline would help, still the idea of going and meeting a Necron Overlord is more than a little scary when you think about it.
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True, Trayzn has a boner for collecting as big as Malcador's was, or maybe even Magnus's is, but he is far from stupid. Also, one of the most polite beings in all of 40K, which is REALLY saying something....
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Think he could be an Element Bearer?
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Are we gonna see Primaris marines.
9320455 No. This series doesn't draw on most of the 8th edition fluff, Primaris Marines included.
Thinking about formatting, it's usually best for flow to bounce back and forth between the different perspectives (as you've been doing). Very few tales which do each arc in one go without the balance of the other arc in close proximity avoid becoming monotonous (even in Tolkien's case, I'd argue Two Towers got a little dry at parts because he did the two arcs separately; and I say this as someone who's such a Tolkien nut that I've read his letters). That's just my recommendation, though.
Off to Solemnace we go for adventure! So their off to go make a deal with trazyn. They’re probably gonna get caught up in a feud between trazyn and another necron overlord so they’ll have to earn whatever artifact there after.
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What about the element Rebecca has? Wouldn't that be important to the empress?
Hold up, didn't celestia use her own genetic code as a base for the ponies? Doesn't that mean that they, at minimum, would be abhuman if not just a subset of human? Dimensional variances equating equestrians to humans, i.e. In equestria the emperor is alicorn but in the imperium she reverts to human?
If Mattias went to equestria, wouldn't he naturally shift into one of the matching subspecies?
"Hi, I'm Twilight Sparkle! My species is probably the only friendly species to ever set foot in your universe, therefore xenophobia is bad and you shouldn't fear or hate aliens and should try and be their friends!"
Why yes, Twilight, you're totally right. We should just drop our xenophobia. It's clearly unjustified.
I'm sorry, what? Twilight, you've spent all that time fighting mass-murdering psycho aliens and now he learns that you're an alien (sort of). Why in the world would he not suspect you were either a sleeper agent or biding your time for the opportune moment to cause the most damage? That is the whole reason the Ordo Xenos exists! Mattias did nothing wrong and Twilight is massively overreacting to something she should have suspect and, from her studies, she knows is a completely justified concern.
If Celestia wasn't your student, the Tyranids wouldn't have been an issue. Because you'd have exploded into a giant Warp rift and the planet would've eaten the Hive Mind right back...and anyone else in the star system. So, yes, the scared confused, naive little psyker is as great a risk as a giant hive mind of aliens and would have been the source of said ravenous horde of daemons. The saving graces are the Element of Harmony thing and Celestia's training.
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Yes, it's incredibly irrational and wrong of her to expect him to keep it secret from the Emperor that Tara/Twilight is an alien (she's technically not, but he has no way of knowing that). In fact, it would be a great grimdark fridge horror experience for her to realize that her being upset he didn't lie to or keep secret from the Emperor that Tara is secretly an alien is exactly the sort of thinking the space horrors infiltrating humanity have. A real: "NO no nonono! I'm not one of them!" moment for her to experience.
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That isn't true, actually. Most of the aliens exterminated had never encountered humanity and were killed as a just-in-case. The only protectorate species were those that were naturally absolute pacifists. The later Imperium after the Horus Heresy took a far more lenient approach and held a "don't bother me and I won't purge you" view of aliens. It is somewhat common for Imperial worlds to have an alien population living away from the humans and they are ignored. As well as alien allies and neutral aliens. As for the Eldar, the Emperor had a standing order during the Great Crusade to kill any Eldar encountered. Even communication with them was technically forbidden though some Primarchs breached that protocol but ultimately exterminated the Craftworlds they were invited to or invaded anyway.
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Warriors are 7-8 feet, Immortals are 9 feet. Lords are taller, but Trazyn is actually a Phaeron. He's rather tall, and would be in the range of the taller primarchs if he wasn't hunched over. Lion is the tallest primarch at12 feet tall.
“Look Mom! I brought you a present! Are you proud of me?”
We sure Trazyn won't try to add twilight to his collection?
Fear not the Xenos, for their ways are not our ways.
Fear not the heretic, for corruption and weakness can come to any.
Fear not the demon, for the warp is nothing in the face of the Empress.
Hate not the Xenos, for all can partake in the Empress’ light.
Hate not the heretic, for any can be redeemed through bloodshed.
Hate not the demon, for hate blinds you to your own mistakes.
Trust not the Xenos; trust must be earned. Any Xeno has their own race at heart.
Trust not the heretic; they have failed once, they can fail again.
Trust not the demon, for they seek to corrupt.