• Published 14th Jan 2016
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The swordsman in white, and the red mage - Joseph_Tanner



Altamir spent most his life in the arena, but soon with the growing though of knowing anyone he would consider a friend, would end up fighting for their live against him, and with the help of another Human he breakes free and starts a new life.

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BONUS CHAPTER [READ STORY FIRST!]

As the title suggests, this is a bonus chapter, which I will use to highlight a few references and easter eggs…

I tried to tailor Itrix’s personality to match that of my caretaker

At first, I intended Itrix’s phone calls to be from me, the writer, not from Etarr

I tried to make Altamir’s character similar to that of Altair Ibn-La’Ahad from Assassins Creed.(A clear minded, ruthless killer with a heart of his own)

Extos and the other Humans were supposed to resemble the Assassin Brotherhood.

I planned to have Celestia’s name to come from Galaxia’s ideas, while Luna’s would come from “Mortis de Lunaris”

The line which Altamir mutters to Primer “Dáyna avruk…” Is actually written in Hungarian, backwards. (It means “You son of a bitch”)

The days left counter is an indicator for how many days are left until the birth of Luna and Celestia.

The conversation between Itrix and Altamir:

-“Well, here we are again…”

-“It’s always such a pleasure”

Is an obvious Portal reference.

Author's Note:

SPOILER! Altamir and Itrix are not actually dead, same goes for Extos- SPOILER!

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