DominicPegasus
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You need more practice writing clop
Exposing yourself to more clopfics and taking notes on what works and what does not will help you on your conquest
It shouldn't be just a wam-bam-thankya-mare ....it should have depth, feeling, proper rise to climax
i see wat u did thar
Shaddup pinkie get outta my post
hehe forth wall can't stop meh
Damn you pinkiepie imma get you
Honestly word count focused on clop less than 150 words ? Out of a 1000 ? Come on
strive for more
strive for greatness
strive fo dat booty
6777690
Thanks for your input. I do read quite a few clopfics but this story was rushed to hell and back. I will defiantly strive to be the best. I do plan on writing another story and will take my time writing it.
Well it is not exactly bad, but like you said it is rushed. I would like a bit more story befor, and maybe after the action.
Bro gotta say 9.5/10 the onlybad thingi can say is i wished thesex scene lasted longer. I meam you did an awesome job setting it up and the Banned from Equestria reference got bonus points in my book so kudos to you sir. But all in 9.5/10, i will be followimg you and i will deffinently read this story agian.
ya when he isn't cloping to it
Damnit Dashie i told you to wait in living room
NEVER!!!!
Love it. Will read again. kinda rushed but still really enjoyable. Great premice and simple setting. I hope to see more from you in the future
6975348 Thank you so much for reading! I am working on another story right now actually but I'm really taking my time with it. Hope to see you again soon!