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Really?
Anyone ever introduces him/herself to me like that, I'm gonna ask to see some ID.
6762750 Not too unbeliveable, there's a cartoon producer named Rip Torn, not sure if that's an alias or for real, but odd name like Skye Rip could happen.
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Names are usually odd anyway, especially surnames.
First, HOLY SHIT, a female Grimm Reaper. Never thought I'd see that.
Everything's good in the first chapter. You've come a long way from the bumbling buffoon you used to be, didn't you?
Why would Death use undead? Why not just use dead spirits as servants? Seems to defeat the point if Death uses things that aren't in its field, you know, of death.
Also female skeleton XD must have bombalicious hips if it's so noticeable that a member of another species can tell your gender from a glance XD.
... What a shit personification of Death. Last time I checked, it was the job of the Grim Reaper to Shepard the dead to the afterlife. It wasn't to stop people dying.
Death as a personification is meant to be calm, polite and near to indifferent. It's a guide. It had business with the living and should not be able to communicate with them. I'd give it to you if you only allowed Granny Smith to be able to perceive that Death is there because she's so old. But no, you have everyone and their dog able to see Death itself just wander and have a chat with their gran.
Also too emotional. Too reactive. It's Death. Walls can't stop it, hiding can't stop and polite conversation and offers of tea and bisuits can't stop it. If Granny is so late, why does Death not just force the issue? Reap the soul and be on her way.
I get the feeling you just wanted a fic about the Grim Reaper in Equestria and didn't really care about the execution. Just for that, I'm going to go through all you've written. And I am going to BITCH about everything that's wrong! It is time, to BITCH my friends! Good day madam/sir!
And this works? Does Death has a replacement to take vacation that long all of a sudden? This is probably hell on all of the staff. I mean, the boss suddenly taking off a year, and they have to do her work? Can this even work out? Especially since Death never took vacation. I'm wondering if they even know what to do!
Quite ironic that Death just saved her instead of watching or waiting to collect her soul!
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Okay, one thing, death is neither omnipresent or all powerful, so of course he has additional staff to help him out. That also explains why there are differant depictions of him from differant cultures. The second thing is that this is his year off, so he does not have to be so much "By-the-book" as he was. That means he is just, y'know, taking a break from reaping souls.
You know there are naturally white trees, right? They don't have to be albino.
6812758 it is a displaced fic as you can see in the description
Pretty good
This looks interesting....
Why do I feel there was supposed to be a prologue at some point?
I know there is the description but that just isn't enough.
EDIT: I just realized that the thing I was missing starts in the middle of chapter 2.
This is weird but a surprising good example of how Death would act. Quirky.