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Where's the Grim Ripper?
6956045 In Tartarus. She won't have her vacation until later.
6956362 You never said that she was there, you just skipped to the nightmare moon part.
6956365 Think about what happened in the 'present'. This is recent, but not in the 'present' time.
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Technically, this is still the past. There's a year and a half to go before we catch up to when the first chapter took place.
This is awesome and I am with Ironwar, where is the Reaper?
6956436 This is still the past. There's a year and a half until you catch up with what happened in the first chapter.
6956443 Oh okay.
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Don't mean I can't complain about it.
Honestly this story seem to be less about Death and more about the Mary Sue of dragon. At this point you could of just made this a spinoff of the other story
So far, half of the entire fanfiction has been about a displaced that isn’t even apart of this story, the actual main character of the story seems to be neglected in terms of character development and actual story. Power scale and it’s system just seem to be an unbalanced mess with little rythem/reason/or sense. The “Crossover” has more chapters than the actual story, I’m not sure why a temporary character is getting so much plot and development. The guy is an experienced displaced with billions of years of age, made of elements, can battle literally gods. Doesn’t notice a spooky man that somehow can hide themselves from an ultra powerful primordial dragon god, and can basicly convert him to some sort of evil version? The amount of inconsistency in ability and power is too much, makes everything hollow