Twilight Sparkle, the newest princess of Equestria, is immortal.
Pinkie Pie, Equestria's best party pony, isn't going to let a little thing like death get in the way of her friendship.
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You really should go over it for some spelling accidents again, but otherwise that was thoroughly enjoyable. It's nice to see a story address Twilight's immortality without immediately melting into angst and self-pity. You also have a really vivid and fun Pinkie Pie voice.
Why do I get the feeling this is going to end like that episode of SU where Steven tries to celebrate all the Crystal Gems' birthdays? Not that I have a problem with it if that's what you were going for, but I do have a problem with you making my mind explode about ways Pinkie and Steven could be similar.
Come on, I haven't even watched ten episodes of SU, and you've already got me thinking of comparisons!
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Thanks :D I'll try to fix up some of my mistakes soon.
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SU did overtake MLP as my favorite show (heresy! Burn him!) so it might have a bit of a Steven-y feel about it. But hopeful nothing will go horribly wrong like in too many birthdays. Hopefully... ;)
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Cool to see that you took inspiration in a different spin, as I can definitely see Pinkie doing this. Will read!