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Who wouldn't wish to be able to do anything they want, whenever they want to? When Twilight Sparkle wakes up one morning and accidentally turns off the sun, however, she realizes being a god might not be all it's cut out to be. Galaxy dodge-ball, time travel, alien demigods- can Twilight learn to control herself before she destroys the world as ponykind knows it?

Cover art courtesy of my good friend Martha, here: dingus-flavin.tumblr.com

Chapters (5)
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Laughed like a madmare while reading. :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Very nice start to a new genre! Keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

Twilight with godlike powers and NOT an alicorn?

I like forward to more. The ponies might think Discord is back or that Luna has gone Nightmare Moonish again.

So Good so far,
however if you're going to make Twilight evil, make her an 'Evil Overlord' not "Super Jerk Evil".
Good Luck! :twilightsmile:

Please more. now 1 minute while i finish rolling around laughing.

Amazing, I love this :twilightsmile:

This is brimming with potential. :pinkiehappy:

Mind = blown :pinkiecrazy:

That was a creative way to deal with the problem, I must say. Poor Twilight. Whatever she thinks next better involve a lot of cake. :trollestia:

Twilight has gone all Discordant.:pinkiecrazy:

Twilight Sparkle is now God. This is acceptable.

wow Twilight's thoughts now equal reality, we are DOOMED i tell you, especially is she goes crazy mode


1. Die not die's
2. Just bold it no need for caps

Well, it was nice knowing you all. But if Twilight's thoughts equal reality, and she doesn't think about us, then that means that we'll cease to exist.
Overanalysis for the flipping win.

Night Mare Moon, huh? Well, get ready to have your already blown minds blown even more! Mare isn't just a female horse, it's also the name of an evil spirit of Germanic folklore which rides on the chests of sleeping people and gives them, get ready for this, nightmares! Nightmare is also the name often used in fantasy settings (like Dungeons & Dragons) for demonic horses, of course they look completely different from Night Mare Moon.

Here's the Nightmare from the 3rd edition Monster Manual:

Yes I like short but often chapters better than long but WAY to far in between chapters that and I like the idea of twilight being an all powerfull god that makes celstia look like a little weakling.


2808680 I don't think weakling cuts it, ant maybe... :twilightblush:

2809271 yeah that works. I would also like to see what discord would say to this.

:twilightsheepish: Sadly, I've decided that for this story to make any sense at all, Discord is still stone. Just imagine that this is all taking place before season 3.

Thanks for your opinions though :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by teganaxis deleted Jul 2nd, 2013

2810514 k thats fine any clue as to when the next chapter might be out?

It's going to be updated every Friday from now on unless I say otherwise. :twilightsmile:

2810514 well if Twilight wraps the laws of time and space just by thinking of it can't see accidentally release him? :twilightoops:

Luna's eyes widened, and she looked up to the ceiling urgently. Celestia raised an eyebrow. "What is it, sister?" The white alicorn asked. Luna shook her head in disbelief.

"I think... I think Twilight just blew up Jupiter."

The fate of the world depended on Twilight not being a spaz.
In the wise words of Princess Luna: they were boned


Twilight asked, concerned for her stepsister.

Incorrect. Cadence is Twilight's sister-in-law.

Oh god. We're all totally boned. All of us. Unless Twi can control her new powers, this will ripple across the multiverse, causing death, destruction, and batpony alicorn OCs! The horror! The horror!

From chapter one onward, I have eagerly awaited each update. You continue to impress me.

Don't worry Twilight. You can simply think Jupiter back into existence.

It's to bad you can't like individual chapters or I would have clicked that thumbs up button on every one of them. As for the cover art?


One of the best parts is, Twilight hasn't figured out an easy solution to her problem.

Change herself so that she is omniscient, and move on to being omnipotent, or at least alter the powers she has so that they go off when she wills it.

The thing is, that solution would kill the story, unless someone thinks of it AFTER the problems are over (yes, you can shamelessly put this in as a joke at the last chapter if you like).



But seriously, to Change something, Twilight has to picture it. How do you picture omniscience? Twilight can't Change her changer powers because she doesn't understand them, and can't picture herself fully in control. :twilightsmile:

I HAVE DEFEATED YOU FOAL :rainbowlaugh: but thanks for the comment! Glad you like the story :heart:


I won't be defeated that easily!:twilightangry2:

*Pictures a thick book entitled: Changer powers: A complete guide to how they work and their use.*

Oh, and, you're welcome. :twilightsmile:

*Twilight at the store*
:twilightangry2: WHERE'S MY CHANGE?!?!?
*Money starts falling from the sky*
:twilightoops: Uhh nevermind then.
But somehow I can see no one having a problem with that scenario.


Aha, but to imagine a book about changer powers Twilight would have to imagine its contents, which she can't do because she doesn't know anything about her powers yet. If she wished for a book about her powers, a book with the same title you put would appear, but it would be completely blank! Have at ye, nonbeliever


Your avatar scares me.


She didn't have to imagine the structure of the sun, and know everything down to the last detail, in order to destroy it, either. It's enough that she was able to picture the idea.

As for the book, she can picture the contents as being literature on what the title of the book is, she'd only need to go as far as focusing on words/diagrams, but not in the precise detail as to what words and diagrams would actually be in there.

If that doesn't work, she could imagine a book about theory of unicorn magic (which she WOULD be familiar with for obvious reasons), and research a new spell to figure out how her changer powers work.


Hmm. Twilight doesn't know enough yet to even have an idea of what her powers truly are. You can't picture the idea if you don't have it in the first place. Even if she does conjure a book that tells her everything, controlling her powers is dependent on her being in complete control of her thoughts. There is no secret solution to her problems :twilightsmile:


She could try to disable or remove her powers, instead of controlling them. Or she could try using unicorn magic to control her mind and stop subconscious imagination or something, and instead only do imagination consciously.


Well, first of all, disabling her powers would be the last thing she'd want to do, considering she needs them to save the world from the apocolypse. And, in my headcannon at least, unicorn magic is based on imagination, so using it to limit imagination would be impossible. :heart: It might be different for everybody, but that's the way it is in my head. :twilightblush:

I've been talking out of my ass this entire time, so I'll stop now lol. Have a nice day! :moustache:

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