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hey
Self-insert fics are not the way to go, newfriend.
7025202 believe it or not, the actual character (name Colva not dark souls character) was based around a book I made 10 years ago (for myself, never published) I will be adapting the character to suit the hero in my book, not base it off myself, but I understand your reluctance at the idea.
7025221 Protagonist sharing the author's name...not exactly a good first impression to new readers you know?
7025241 1st( my real name isnt Colva, if that's what you mean)
2nd ( I never said he'd keep that name for long)
Pardon my French, but holy shit that is a lot of information thrown at my face, even though I've played DS1 & 2, and watched a lot of videos, this is the story equivalent of trying to eat while food keeps appearing on your plate in large proportions.
*sigh*
If you do feel like revisiting this chapter, please, add some sort of pacing, also, attempt to make it to where people who have never even heard of DS can kinda understand what is going on in this
Sorry if this comes off as mean, but I'm trying for some constructive criticism, as you need it if you want this story to be better.
Oh, btw, msg me if you need any more help, I like this idea, and I'd hate to see this go hollow
~RandomClick
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I did warn you that, for those who dont understand the lore of some things, to watch vartividia, otherwise, me trying to explain it would add a whole extra chapter, and I dont want that.
Nice dark souls story im lokking forward to more and im just saying this ting so dont be mad but plz dont give up on this story like other people have done on the dark souls stories ok i relly enjoy this story ok ^_^
7082043 dont worry, as this is a prequel to Gathering Embers, I plan on finishing this, im just waiting for ds3 so I can (possibly?) Incorporate some aspects from that (that could be anything from npcs and enemies to weapons and bosses, cause I have no idea what Im gonna get myself into for that game)
Many monarchs have come and gone...
I'm pretty sure that it's called Vendrick Castle, not Castle Drangleic.
8129152 nope, both the wikis and in game calls it Drangleic Castle