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Only 20 snuggles!?! I demand 50!
MANDATORY CUDDLES!!
I can't be the only one who thought that, right?
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Thanks!
I was shooting for a feeling of sudden abruptness in chapter 1. Things have slowed way down by chapter 4.
Anyone ever notice Canterlot Mountain looks like a wang?
Does the Ouroboros have living artillery? I know she said it grows weapons, but I'm wondering if that includes battleship-sized cannons, capable of going broadside and dishing out 16" of organic devastation.
...... And i gotta cry foul on the dragons being controlled. Its a little farfetched that something like a Dragon could be infected. It would be hard enough to create a creature able to survive their extreme physiology let alone be able to take over their minds.
6473311 The parasite goes through the eye's, which tends to be the weakest part of the body and in nature is one of the easiest entry point for various types of external/internal parasites.
I keep picturing Moira or Talon, living ships from Farscape...
6473311 geeze mythy you're a bigger nitpicker than a hungry gibbon at a buffet sometimes
this, right here is why ships are referred to as females (with a few differences of course). in much the same way a mother provides for a child, a ship provides for her crew.
1) The Ouroboros is just my waifu in a way... can it also swim and dive? I imagine gigant plates that seal the upper deck when it goes underwater but ussually are sticked to the sides.
2) In soviet equestria mandatory snuggles are ordered to you!
3) It's not a war of altrition. It's a war of love, and in love and war evrything is allowed - even to use your foe's tech tk the point of beeing dependant of it. And srsly: even tech runs here on love. Propably even death rays. You can't not love that.
4) 1997... 1998... 1999... 2000 snug'lz don, capt'n!
EDIT: Does it mean an evryday update?
Torquoise font is my inner OC voice thingy. It means destruction and acidental damage.
Chrysalis must have scored big time if she made this shipling. Wonder if she ever scratches it's hull calling it her baby...
Will we see hybrids and other wierd things that came from the bug labs and were converted? Dragon-pony hybryds, Ponies 2.0, Changeling Underqueens or Robots? (Sweetie Bot - it's certainly a possibility!)
Three words: ENTER THE DISCORD, MOTHABUCKA!!! (Technicly four and because moth is an insect)
So...
We live in a flying whale.
...Sweeeeeet.
Yes, I am aware it's not a whale, but the idea amuses me so.
This story better go on for a long time. This is epic win.
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Ouroboros sounds like a pretty awesome contraption - a flying, living base-ship that adapts to the needs of its inhabitants? That's pretty awesome. I wonder if, given enough time, it could morph in to an entire floating city. Assuming it isn't already close to that ... how big is the ship, exactly, and how big of a population is it housing at present point in time? I imagine a fair bit, seeing as there have been plenty of childbirths already onboard.
I'm a bit less certain how I feel about the parasites infesting even dragons, though - it's starting to feel like they (and by extension, Mariposa) are being presented as too powerful and all-encompassing, if they can take over the world this easily. What are their limitations, their weaknesses? Because at the moment it sounds a little bit too much of a good deal.
Speaking of which, there is one important question that needs to be answered - namely, where is Discord in all this? Because I can't imagine him being too cool with all this, and the moment the disease infected Fluttershy and caused her to lose her wings? That's Mariposa's personal ticket to a special version of hell designed specifically for her, and there isn't much a changeling queen could do but get bent over once Discord comes for her.
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Or in this case, as seen from a changeling perspective, a very productive, very effective, very useful drone. Possibly even Chrysalis' favourite drone.
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I actually have very good reasons why some dragons became infected.
Spike, as you can see, wasn't infected.
And as an aside, some questions will not be answered for a long, long time. If you want to know what is going on and how the rest of the world fares, you will have to keep reading. Right now, we only see what Sideralis sees, we only know what he knows, and just what does he know, exactly?
Ouroboros = Moira from Farscape.
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Suppose where Mariposa "grew up" was near where the dragons lived on on the other side of the Badlands?
And she started practicing her craft on monsters like Manticores, Rockadiles, and the like before moving up to dragons.
After the dragons were tackled, she used her new monsterous minions to capture ponies and test new parasites on them?
It strikes me that while Crystalis is more of a mastermind changeling like Celestia, Mariposa seems more like Twilight.
Analysing weaknesses, coming up with lots of contingencies, and utilizing her skills to their utmost instead of relying on others.
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And you would be correct.
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Wow, either I'm getting REALLY familiar with your writings or you're getting into my head and sending me ideas.
Either way. . .
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I never said which part you were correct about.
6474070 And...I love this story. Wish each chapter was longer, but meh. It's fine the way it is. It certainly has drawn me in and I await more from you! o3o
6473475 Better them than Lexx. Euuugh.
A bio-ship? *sqee* bow all i can image it as is a certain *cough* Tyranid *cough* bio-ship.
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You clearly haven't seen Mutalist ships. Cold, unfeeling metal and living flesh, as one being. They are beautiful, and they are sapient. They learn, fight and think like we do, but can survive in the vacuum of space. Tyranids are nasty creatures, and their hive ships are purely flesh. I understand that Tyranids would be the first thought when it comes to massive living ships, but they are not a mix of metal and flesh. My Mutalist ships are. I can feel them inside me. They are hungry.
6473475 or the ship from where Kerrigan commands her troops.
A living whale-like airship? You wouldn't happen to be a fan of The Leviathan series by Scott Westerfeld would you? If you don't know what I'm talking about, and steampunk WW1 sounds super bad-ass, then I suggest you look it up.
Mandatory Snuggles.... I like this idea...
You sir. YOU! Hehehe. I like you.