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I maintain that the P.E.T. is fucking retarded, has only a minuscule basis in medical science and is unnecessary to introduce the concept of heat as a point of conflict, but good chapter otherwise. I await more.
Yeah, I came here for the trains, not sex.
7429188 You really should've expected this with the rating and the trains...
The idea of the ponies of Equestria going through a heat cycle has always terrified me. Just thinking about a race that has literal super powers with a higher female-to-male population, suddenly having an uncontrollable urge to mate, FOR A WHOLE WEEK, is a rather frightening combo in my book.
Thats going to be a loong, sloow ride. Especially in the tunnel.
Ahh, Cider with Sunset.
Finally, an update!
*reads*
Hm... I get the sense that estrus-induced hijinks and awkward moments are imminent in the next chapter.
IT LIVES!
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They're sapient beings, so it's not an uncontrollable urge to mate. It's more like, they're horny as fuck, very irritable unless they're with someone they plan to have sex with, and easily distractible, but they're not going to run around raping guys or having completely indiscriminate sex. Real-world mares in heat still choose the mates they want rather than giving it up for any stallion whatsoever, so obviously there's some self control, and if the animals have self control the sapient versions would have more.
The real issue for the stallions is that the scent of the mares in heat is likely to drive them into a frenzy of horniness. Unless a guy has a girlfriend or a wife I could see him choosing to nope out of the whole thing.
OK, time for another possible outcomes checklist:
1: Awkward hijinks... 'nuff said.
2: Clop, although I seriously doubt it considering that you had him express his reluctance towards pony-snu-snu quite clearly to Twilight during the second to last segment of this chapter.
3: A heartwarming moment of understanding and acceptance between them, regardless of what actually happens.
4: Some combination of the three.
...I'm really hoping for number three to be in there somehow.
Hmm, the sexual part is still not needed for the story if you ask me...Either way you choose to take this however, continue on. More trains!
Just want to say that this was done much better than the last time.
You will have to remind me, but do the lack of Romance and Sex tags indicate that they will not feature at all? Or will they be added if they do come? Because that chapter ending...
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The tags will be added when the time comes, my friend.
Hmm... Does Nathan go with Sunset or Twilight... Damn this is gonna be interesting. Also you don't need to take the heat bit away from the story, you're the author, if people don't like the concept of there being sex in a story then they just have to stop reading or skip a couple paragraphs.
Hey that stuff's rare bottle it!
Would a rigorous Stamina exam be called "heavy P.E.T.ting"?