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The weather controlling itself shouldn't be that interesting to Twilight Sparkle. It is suggested in Bridle Gossip that that's how the weather works in the Everfree Forest.
Nice chapter. Not as great as the others, but the story itself is progressing very nicely. I like how you're taking your time to explain every event.
Short, but with some development, helps to move things along slightly, though I am curious how his engines going to get to where it belongs.
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Spike looks nothing like a talking dragon of western myth, or most popular media.
He's a lizard man/boy.
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With - admittedly shorter legs.
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he's purple, he has a forked tail. Besides, you missed the glaringly obvious joke there.
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I REGRET NOTHING
we HAD a way to control weather (rain) with the dry ice canon, but it was discontinued for reasons
I would have figured that Spike would be seen as a lizard-man or at best a wurm. He does not look like a dragon.
When coming across something new, try to have Nathan look at it an outsider instead of using your knowledge of Equestria to know what it is. I also think he was a little too blaze about the whole weather manipulation. I mean magic is terrific and all but controlling the weather is on a so much bigger scale that it would be stupendous.
Good story so far.
Holy Shit! A talking Iguana!
DISCORD....WHAT HAVE YOU DONE NOW !!!!!!