My Little Pony: Friendship is Overpowered (Season 4)

by ocalhoun

S04E08 Rarity Takes Manehattan

Suri Polomare nearly swooned over Rarity's shimmering line. "Actually... just a touch of this fabric could be perfect with it. W— Oh, hey, would you mind terribly if I took a swatch?"

Rarity laughed a little to herself and waved her off with a hoof. "Once the contest is over, dear, I'll be glad to sell you as much as you'd like, but it wouldn't make sense to help out my competition, now would it?"

Comments

[Stahl]

You're missing some quotation marks in that second paragraph, I believe.

[Neko Majin C]

Once the contest is over, dear, I'll be glad to sell you as much as you'd like, but it wouldn't make sense to help out my competition, now would it?

Missing quotation marks.

Okey-dokey Loki no key. How is Twilight supposed to open the box without the keys? Wait, do not answer that. By being ridiculously over-powered, right?

~KBO.

[Tatsurou]

6512447
The box never showed up in this timeline.

[StevieBond]

Well, that's one way to deny Suri from winning the competition, I guess Coco Pommel gets fired anyway so she can be free to do follow her own dreams.

[Neko Majin C]

6512458 Actually, according to 6503358, it did.

[Neko Majin C]

6512495 That is a very good point. Then what is the box for? Just to create the castle?

[ocalhoun]

6512378
Pay no attention to those quotation marks that are not behind the curtain!

6512447
You guessed it! She'll just blast the sucker open.

6512492
Nah, not fired. She gets laid off when Suri goes out of business. Thankfully, that means she gets unemployment compensation.

6512509
As if Twi couldn't build her own castle.

[Awesomo3000]

"No, darling, I'm afraid you might stab me in the back. I know that sounds incredibly rude and out of nowhere but eh, "overpowered" is in the title of this fic."

[StevieBond]

Nah, not fired. She gets laid off when Suri goes out of business. Thankfully, that means she gets unemployment compensation.

That's even better, now that you mention it.

[Talguy21]

6512582

Waitwaitwait- There's no box! They never gave the elements back to the tree, so no box ever 'grew.'

Unless you're talking about Twilight blasting Tirek wide open, which is an idea I can totally get behind.

[BlueYoshi]

There you go, Rarity! Letting Suri borrow your fabric AFTER the contest is over helps avert the problem that was supposed to happen in S04 E08!

[MixMassBasher]

Aww Buy what about Coco....
Did see quit her job?

[TheVirginianist]

I'll read this later, I've got A LOT of internet adventure for me to do!

Awesome Job by the way Ocalhoun!

[ocalhoun]

6513007

She gets laid off when Suri goes out of business. Thankfully, that means she gets unemployment compensation.

6514242
There will be more of it later!

6512741
So many problems averted.

6512729
The tree spontaneously grew a box while offscreen.

6512598
Look how much street smarts she has now!

[Talguy21]

6514292

Oh, great. The tree is overpowered too. ...I guess even overpowered magical entities need help from Twilight Sparkle, huh?

[TheVirginianist]

6514292 It sucks cause I'm not on this website that much and I'm missing out already on your work on the Friendship Is Overpowered Series.

Anyways, like I said, good luck on the rest of this, homie!

[Autobot Robrony]

Wait a minute, what will happen to Coco?

[ferret]

6527594
TO THE BACKGROUND DUNGEON

[Charzoid]

Meh, I don't think this would honestly stop her from just snatching the fabric when she isn't looking then lie to the judges that Rarity gave her permission to use it.

[Jake Witt]

Nitpick, unfun, comment: Finally.