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Tears in the dark.

Tragedy strikes Ponyville. Only three lost their lives. But for one crimson colored stallion, three were too many.

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Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #1 · Aug 20th, 2015 · · ·

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Why?

LavaBubble

LavaBubble #2 · Aug 20th, 2015 · · ·

I can say that it is a good story, but you may want to find a proof reader, as there are a few errors here and there. Not very many, and I think if you yourself read it again, you could find them. I do like how you italicized the flashback scenes. All in all, a good read.

lunasroyalguard4life3

lunasroyalguard4life3 #3 · Aug 21st, 2015 · · ·

Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm who's the pony with blue eyes and a yellow coat. Because Fluttershy has green eyes, and Rarity had a white coat sogood story though, unlike the other guy I don't really care for errors but for the quality of the story itself