Chapter 4 The return to the temple
"Twilight what ever you see inside or whatever may happen don't panic." Kaiber said in a calming voice.
"Yes I shall try." Twilight said sounding kinda like fluttershy.
"Okay let's go." Kaiber said in such envusiasm that even pinkie pie would be upstaged.
The two Jedi headed towards the burning temple. Unluckily for them it was surrounded by a battalion of clone troopers who shot at the jedi on sight. But Kaiber ignited his saber and deflected the lasers back to the clone it came from.
"Wait a second Kaiber these are celestia's private battalion." Twilight said noticing the sun on the clones' shoulders
"mmm you are right but I sense her but something is wrong." Kaiber said stroking his chin.
"What do you mean?" Twilight practically screamed the question.
"Her force signature is faint but far away," Kaiber explained "But she seems alright."
"Where is she?" Twilight asked head tilted.
Kaiber sighed again at the unicorn's determination to find her mentor. "She could be anywhere the onlypony who would know is luna."
"Okay master," Twilight said bowing to him showing her loyalty to the Jedi order "But may I inquire into what you are doing in the security tapes?"
"I'm need to find out what happened to our friends and allies," The Grand Master said looking into the computer screen to reel back in shock, fear or worry. "NO NO IT CAN'T BE!"
Twilight ran to his aid "Master Kaiber are you okay?" she asked.
"Twilight do not approach Celestia in any circumstance," he said in a way that would scare anypony "She's turned to the Dark side."
*Meanwhile in Canterlot*
Luna was pacing in worry. She could see the temple in ponyville on fire her sister being a Jedi naturally she was worried. But then the sound of hooves could be heard from the entrance to the library.
"Luna."
Luna turned to see her sister behind her standing proud and suspicious. But luna didn't notice that because she was so happy to see her alive and well and instantly hugged her.
"Oh tia I saw the temple on fire I got a report from the chancellors office saying you had returned..." Luna cried out but silenced by celestia.
"Luna I'm fine but I'm afraid that the Jedi have rebelled against the republic." Celestia lied.
"Oh tia what are you going to do?" Luna asked worried.
"I'm going to stay loyal to the chancellor and to the republic," celestia boasted "I have seen master faust attempt to assassinate the chancellor herself."
"But what about Twilight?" Luna asked driving home a stake to the good left in the new born sith lord.
"I just hope she stays loyal to the chancellor," she lied "I have been ordered to capture the forces of evil that lie in tarterous for the chancellor I'll be back soon."
And with that she was gone.
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Your FIRST mistake was crossing over with one of the prequels.
6173450 hey I'm 14 and have special needs so cut the crap
6173636 I like the prequels yeah I know the originals are better but it doesn't matter they are star wars
Hey man its alpha2015 here don't listen to what the others say just continue I like the story so keep it up and if you need help pm me I will try to give you some ideas so follow what you think is right. also its nice to know that there is some about the same age as me as I am 13 anyway keep up the good work man. And May The Force Be with You.
And also people don't be assholes to him its his story so try to help and not pester him you should be happy he is at least trying to make a good story so if you dont like it fuck off I'll watch out for my bro here even if we aren't related or have even seen each other i still try to look out for my friend and if you don't like the story then piss off are we clear. Ok good. Also alicornjedi don't listen to them they are just being assholes continue with what you think is good for the story
6174216 Thanks mate I needed that. I get bullied at school a lot so it got me in the feels. And may the force be with you too.
It's no problem bro I know what it's like to be bullied so I try to help and if you need anything pm me and I will try to help as much as I can I consider all of my friends as family so let me know if you need anything and if you want to talk about stuff that is bothering you let me know I will listen to what you have to say because family looks out for one another. P.S I understand alot of what your going through so if you want to tell me your problems I will listen and try help as much as I can
6174387 thanks man why are there not many people like you around the earth
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^ For those who still want to see my review of the story.
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^ For the author. Before you delete this comment, please check the above links. Especially the imgur one.
Before you slap your "special needs" again, I myself have severe ADHD and depression. Thank you.
6177431 well thanks for not swearing at me and I read through the post you showed me some of the things in their are good but still contradict what you commented
6174216
Oh, look, it's someone using an alt to give himself words of encouragement.
P.S. Next time you want to pretend to be someone else, make sure your second account doesn't write posts exactly the same way that your first one does.
6178252
How exactly did the contents in the links contradict my statements?
6180236 Well what you wasn't constructive criticism on my part and also I'm writing chapter 5 to be the back story you asked for
6180825
I still gave you a few tips that you could've applied but didn't (minus the backstory part).
6180840 I'm trying my best I have come to terms that you don't like my story but there's no need for you to try and put me down. As my mum says "if you don't want to do something you think is wrong don't do it" just apply that to the story "if you don't like the story then don't read it."
6178613 well that is pretty funny concept but it is not true me and him are a in different countries and b never met in our lives and most likely won't
And if I wanted words of encouragement I have my friends in school