The only suggestions I can think of right now are for Cloud Mist and Zecora...definitely Zecora. After all, Spike still needs to make that payment for the nose plugs.
Funniest chapter of all time. The girls' reaction to Spike's wings, particularly RD's possessiveness and Shy becoming a mad are for sex, made me laugh. Watching PP refer to RD and Aj as the Ashelighs and comparing her voice with Shy was a nice detail. The CMC's traumatized reaction at the beginning and when they heard Spike going at it was hilarious. Likewise, it was funny watching all the waitresses and Zecora develop a healthy interest on Spike (I want to see Cloud Mist and Zecora). Rarity's ire at AJ having Spike first and Fluttershy/Twilight harbor in a small resentment for AJ being the first one to get pregnant made me laugh and feel happy for the best pony (AJ). This has been one wild ride (no pun intended) and I thank you for this story.
Liked most of this chapter. Could have did without the whole part between, Spike and Rarity's first night and the explanation about, Spike's, herd, and chasing, AJ, was just over the top. Not her fault, Rarity's, a tease and plays too hard to get.
Other than that, the story was good, and the other mares, like Zecora, that got their eyes on, Spike would make for some nice bonus chapters. Good luck. Later!
Wow. Just...wow. I don't normally read 17K chapters in one go. It usually takes me awhile, but this? This had everything. Humor. Romance. Sex. I loved it. I knew neither Fluttershy nor Twilight were going to be the first mare in his herd to get pregnant. What the hell was Rarity's problem? She should be happy that Spike wanted to save her for last. That was not cool. The only things I want to know is what happened when he had to pay Zecora? How did Sweetie Belle pay back the other two crusaders? And who will get pregnant first out of Flutters and Twi (it will be messed up if they both conceive on the same day)?
The only suggestions I can think of right now are for Cloud Mist and Zecora...definitely Zecora. After all, Spike still needs to make that payment for the nose plugs.
6439297 I was gonna suggest the same thing with Zecora.
Funniest chapter of all time. The girls' reaction to Spike's wings, particularly RD's possessiveness and Shy becoming a mad are for sex, made me laugh. Watching PP refer to RD and Aj as the Ashelighs and comparing her voice with Shy was a nice detail. The CMC's traumatized reaction at the beginning and when they heard Spike going at it was hilarious. Likewise, it was funny watching all the waitresses and Zecora develop a healthy interest on Spike (I want to see Cloud Mist and Zecora). Rarity's ire at AJ having Spike first and Fluttershy/Twilight harbor in a small resentment for AJ being the first one to get pregnant made me laugh and feel happy for the best pony (AJ). This has been one wild ride (no pun intended) and I thank you for this story.
You seem to get CMC to be near Spike in many naughty event...somehow Injust want some of them to finally join it already....
Liked most of this chapter. Could have did without the whole part between, Spike and Rarity's first night and the explanation about, Spike's, herd, and chasing, AJ, was just over the top. Not her fault, Rarity's, a tease and plays too hard to get.
Other than that, the story was good, and the other mares, like Zecora, that got their eyes on, Spike would make for some nice bonus chapters.
Good luck. Later!
There's still the steamy rut debt he still has on Zecora.
I like.
Wow. Just...wow. I don't normally read 17K chapters in one go. It usually takes me awhile, but this? This had everything. Humor. Romance. Sex. I loved it. I knew neither Fluttershy nor Twilight were going to be the first mare in his herd to get pregnant. What the hell was Rarity's problem? She should be happy that Spike wanted to save her for last. That was not cool. The only things I want to know is what happened when he had to pay Zecora? How did Sweetie Belle pay back the other two crusaders? And who will get pregnant first out of Flutters and Twi (it will be messed up if they both conceive on the same day)?
YOU DID NOT JUST! Ah, who am I kidding? AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Well I just thought of an episode in Season 5 that lost a good amount of it's importance.
Wow.
Maybe he should rename himself Stopgap Armor then. Or maybe just "placeholder".
She sounds like she can't wait for her husband to croak. That's... really, really creepy.
well.....that was awesome!!! like 20% cooler!
Wow,best story I've read in romance (and sex) so far! I appreciate all your work, especially if it's flipping 17k words
Can't wait to read the sequel!
Not sure if or
......................damn. Flutters, you scary.