"First" Celestia continued while holding Spike "You have to find other mates and give them your love. That is how you'll earn your prize. And I'm quite sure you'll start with your other friends. Especially Rarity. She definitely needs to be shown what she's missing. But take it at your own pace. Okay stop that." Spike immediately stopped crawling in place and stared up at the mare that had total control over him at the moment, awaiting her further instruction.
Applejack raised herself up in surprise after hearing this. "Really?" she asked hopefully "Ya mean it?"
"If I didn't I wouldn't have said it" Spike replied calmly and smugly at the same time.
"Well then..." AJ stammered "Ta heck with it! I love ya too Spike" she finished with a loving kiss to Spike's lips. "Wait" she said as she brought herself back "What about Rarity?"
"My mind is getting its blood back and nopony else is on it aside from you" Spike stated "Maybe we keep it that way right now?"
Spike stared off into space, wide eyed and shocked. "Oh my god."
"I know" Twilight responded "Rarity doesn't know what she's missing."
The pair stayed still in half comfortable, half shocked silence. Twilight was unaware of the latter since she was behind Spike and couldn't see his face.
I'm sensing a pattern here.....is Rarity really that aloof or conceited?? Why hasn't she set the truth straight for Spike yet?
And inevitably, at some point, Rarity will find out what is going on, and I'm calling it that she's gonna be the only one that doesn't want to be with Spike at all. How is that gonna happen when the rubber meets the road then? Spike has always wanted to court Rarity, though I can understand that it has pretty much taken a bit on the back burner since he actually got a marefriend in Twilight.
Good chapter. Great to see you stopped using his name. I'm sure that's the reason for the down votes. Also, you may want to get an idea of what, Spike's, member may look like. For some reason when you got to, Fluttershy, she may want to get a good look at it. Not really sure why I think that, just seems to fit her personality and her fear of intimidating dragons.
How to write 101: NEVER use *action* asterisks ;it is very amateur and unsightly. Stop at the right time or sentence to describe what the character is doing mid dialogue. it is a form of pacing.
9138788Yeah, you can kind of tell this is an earlier fic of mine, before I was better and had an editor.
I basically relied on this explanation for the ease of his seductions.
Celestia bid them farewell, wished them a happy future, and wished Spike luck in his further acquisitions. She also decided not to tell him a certain something so as not to hinder his confidence. That male dragons have a gland in their tail that releases mood changing pheromones when seeking a mate. For female dragons, it pulls back their resistance and enhances their attraction. For other males, it lets them know that they are ready to fight for the female. The smaller, weaker males usually back off in fear while the bigger ones issue a challenge. Also, equines are much more susceptible to these pheromones.
Excellent work and now Applejack's selected.
This chapter was great. Spike and AJ walking in on Cheerilee and Big. Mac was hilarious.
Why Spikey ?
I saved the best for last....
Celestia?
Pancake!
Food stuff?
Marsh mellows?
diamonds!
Our sisters don't share anything..........
Oh wow. Demonizing Dragons to make Spike and Ponies in general look better. On top of all the cliched sap...
Seriously, I almost wish Spike was as domineering as Celestia says the Dragons are. Then at least things would be a bit more interesting.
I'm sensing a pattern here.....is Rarity really that aloof or conceited?? Why hasn't she set the truth straight for Spike yet?
And inevitably, at some point, Rarity will find out what is going on, and I'm calling it that she's gonna be the only one that doesn't want to be with Spike at all. How is that gonna happen when the rubber meets the road then? Spike has always wanted to court Rarity, though I can understand that it has pretty much taken a bit on the back burner since he actually got a marefriend in Twilight.
6117441 Why hasn't she set the truth straight yet?
Watch Castle Sweet Castle again and you tell me.
So when is the update?
6133613 Patience.
*Sip* It was Fla-[No! I refuse to do this anymore!]
Thank god i was about to punch something.
Good chapter. Great to see you stopped using his name. I'm sure that's the reason for the down votes. Also, you may want to get an idea of what, Spike's, member may look like. For some reason when you got to, Fluttershy, she may want to get a good look at it. Not really sure why I think that, just seems to fit her personality and her fear of intimidating dragons.
Good luck all the same. This is a good read!
Is the Big Mac and Applebloom ep going to be weird?
How to write 101:
NEVER use *action* asterisks ;it is very amateur and unsightly.
Stop at the right time or sentence to describe what the character is doing mid dialogue. it is a form of pacing.
Pls edit
Talk about a roll in the hay... literally.
Bushel or bushel-basket.
8226782 Ah.
AJ did seem to fold a little easily. I think even when aroused she would be weirded out by Spike groping her.
9138788 Yeah, you can kind of tell this is an earlier fic of mine, before I was better and had an editor.
I basically relied on this explanation for the ease of his seductions.