This chapter was funny. From PP breaking the fourth wall, to Rarity's conspiracy theory about mates, and Twilight's rivalry with Fluttershy about which mare gets pregnant first. Thanks for the chapter.
I get that she's loyal and all, but: 1/RD's being a straight up bitch here and 2/ Fluttershy obviously can take care of herself.
"Relax" Rainbow said though not dropping the look "I won't hurt him." Twilight still kept her horn ignited as Spike was stopped by a wall. After a few tense seconds of Rainbow just staring Spike down, she took hold of his face and gave him a forceful kiss, surprising both Spike and Twilight. Before Spike could embrace the kiss, Rainbow broke away and pushed her forehead against his while also pressing her arm to his chest. With narrowed eyes she said "You're entering a world of pain if you do anything to hurt them, especially Fluttershy. If she asks you for a glass of water, you bring her a gallon. If she asks you to feed her animals, you do it for the next five years. If she wants you to give her a foal, you better get a lot of Hooferade and keep your jewels nice and cool." "..........A-" "A world of pain" Rainbow enunciated after cutting Spike off "Do you understand me lizard boy?" "Yes" Spike confirmed fearfully.
Seriously, I just about want a bit of Spike comeback for the threat. Also, he's a DRAGON. RD's got and a hell of a set of stones if she really thinks she can threaten a damn DRAGON..
I get it, it shouldn't be so personal and it ties into her loyalty thing. I should just let that go and continue the story. Just needed to vent my piece on that part.
Now to the actual rest of the story. Very cool of Twilight protecting Spike from RD when she went ballistic.
Seriously, how many rounds does he have on one charge?! Just this chapter alone, it was Spike and Twilight twice, then Spike coming to Sugarcube Corner for a treat. Pinkie gets him to join her in her room where there are at least 3 times, and finally Twilight come up looking for Spike and pretty much had a three way that lasted for ninety minutes, I have to believe that there has to be at least 3 a piece from Twi and Pinkie, and hell it could be 4 for Spike. I'm envious as hell!
Sweetie and Scoots win their bets on Rarity! Touch luck, Apple Bloom .
And now I'm pretty sure that Rarity herself can at least hear what she's missing, since everypony has already kinda said that to her in one way or another. Dibs on 2 chapters before she goes loco--well more loco than she probably is.
I get a feeling that all of the girls are gonna get pregnant, whether they are really trying, or unexpected. I'm gonna call it; by the end of this story, there will be at least three new kirins in the mist, probably more than three but definitely three.
Finally I got to hand it to Pinkie: She's really got it going one. Sure she's random as hell, but she's awesome, and I got to admit, as much it was enjoyable with the whipped cream and other stuff, I really loved when she went all close to Madam on Spike (bedroom eyes, personality, the whole nine yards). I love to see her femininity is shining bright even when at times she's the party pony.
6299158 I actually like that she did that. Very much in character for her, and it's good that they keep Spike's ego in check. That's one problem he tends to show over and over; best to make sure he knows he can't just use and discard them.
Also, at this point in time, Rainbow Dash can break Spike like a boy. He's not fully-grown yet.
You have a valid point, as usual. I really need to look at the entire context of the passage before I spout more nonsense like that next-to-last comment of mine. It's probably me; I see dragons as powerful creatures, even the younger one like Spike and generally I have the reasoning of 'you can't really control a dragon, no matter what you try'. I get that ultimately she was right to get at Spike the way she did and that he understands and accepts the consequences of sexing Twilight and her friends--plus her protection for Fluttershy (I still think she can stand on her own, though). In laypony terms, no sexual hit-and-runs.
6299158 yeah I agree with you, I know she was trying to be there for her friend, but she was taking it a bit to far. and it's probably not a good idea to get on the bad side of a creature that can rip you to shreds with there teeth and claws, then burn your body to ash. even if that creature is smaller then you.
6300142 Spikes a fucking dragon he's supposed to have a harem and you can't change that I still don't see why rainbow had to be such a bitch about it spike could of burned her alive then and there if he wanted to.
6322796 So, being a dragon gives him an excuse to be a horrible individual? To act worse than pretty much all of the villains we've seen so far, all without having to worry about punishment, simply because he's a dragon?
No. Dragons tend to think of themselves too highly anyway. You don't see ponies going around murdering the young ones of other species, which is what those teenage dragons told him to do. It's a good thing Spike didn't and doesn't act like most dragons, else they would do well to lock him up.
6322823 And threatening one of your friends isn't being a horrible individual? I don't know how Rainbow threatening Spike is deemed as being something a good individual would do. And I said he could if he wanted to which he doesn't because for some unfathomable reason he still views her as a friend even after she threatened him. Plus everypony doesn't go around threatening their friends.
6323065 Threatening harm is the same as murder then?
Also, I said I like that somepony has a sense to keep Spike's ego in check. That doesn't mean I think what she did was something a good person would do. However, it was very much in character for her to put herself between her friends and someone who has the best position in the world to hurt them deeply. That was what I liked about the scene.
Nevermind that you appear to miss the point about her saying she wasn't going to do anything unless he did so first, or the fact that she kissed him right before that. Would you honestly see him as being in the right if Rainbow told him she'd go after him if he hurt their friends and he reacts with burning her to death? That seems... skewed.
6323096 My main point is she was being a bitch If someone did that to me while I had no intention of doing anything wrong I would outright call that person a dick and tell them to get the fuck out of my face I don't care if it would be a friend or something I'm not going to let someone talk to me like that when I didn't even do anything wrong. And neither should spike I hate when people try and make other people intimidated when they have done nothing wrong and don't deserve it. And one thing you need to realize is that Spike would never NEVER think about hurting his friends and that is what Rainbow should realize too.
This chapter was funny. From PP breaking the fourth wall, to Rarity's conspiracy theory about mates, and Twilight's rivalry with Fluttershy about which mare gets pregnant first. Thanks for the chapter.
The only stile i can think of are "turn stiles"at stadiums or Ryan Stiles. I'm guessing both are wrong?
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6298780 Yes. Sorry
If Flutters put the hurt locker on Shining by proxi wait till Spike nails Rarity, He's a dead colt boinking,
I get that she's loyal and all, but: 1/RD's being a straight up bitch here and 2/ Fluttershy obviously can take care of herself.
Seriously, I just about want a bit of Spike comeback for the threat. Also, he's a DRAGON. RD's got and a hell of a set of stones if she really thinks she can threaten a damn DRAGON..
I get it, it shouldn't be so personal and it ties into her loyalty thing. I should just let that go and continue the story. Just needed to vent my piece on that part.
Now to the actual rest of the story. Very cool of Twilight protecting Spike from RD when she went ballistic.
Seriously, how many rounds does he have on one charge?! Just this chapter alone, it was Spike and Twilight twice, then Spike coming to Sugarcube Corner for a treat. Pinkie gets him to join her in her room where there are at least 3 times, and finally Twilight come up looking for Spike and pretty much had a three way that lasted for ninety minutes, I have to believe that there has to be at least 3 a piece from Twi and Pinkie, and hell it could be 4 for Spike. I'm envious as hell!
Sweetie and Scoots win their bets on Rarity! Touch luck, Apple Bloom .
And now I'm pretty sure that Rarity herself can at least hear what she's missing, since everypony has already kinda said that to her in one way or another. Dibs on 2 chapters before she goes loco--well more loco than she probably is.
I get a feeling that all of the girls are gonna get pregnant, whether they are really trying, or unexpected. I'm gonna call it; by the end of this story, there will be at least three new kirins in the mist, probably more than three but definitely three.
Finally I got to hand it to Pinkie: She's really got it going one. Sure she's random as hell, but she's awesome, and I got to admit, as much it was enjoyable with the whipped cream and other stuff, I really loved when she went all close to Madam on Spike (bedroom eyes, personality, the whole nine yards). I love to see her femininity is shining bright even when at times she's the party pony.
Waiting for more!
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I actually like that she did that. Very much in character for her, and it's good that they keep Spike's ego in check. That's one problem he tends to show over and over; best to make sure he knows he can't just use and discard them.
Also, at this point in time, Rainbow Dash can break Spike like a boy. He's not fully-grown yet.
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You have a valid point, as usual. I really need to look at the entire context of the passage before I spout more nonsense like that next-to-last comment of mine. It's probably me; I see dragons as powerful creatures, even the younger one like Spike and generally I have the reasoning of 'you can't really control a dragon, no matter what you try'. I get that ultimately she was right to get at Spike the way she did and that he understands and accepts the consequences of sexing Twilight and her friends--plus her protection for Fluttershy (I still think she can stand on her own, though). In laypony terms, no sexual hit-and-runs.
COOLIO!
6299158 yeah I agree with you, I know she was trying to be there for her friend, but she was taking it a bit to far. and it's probably not a good idea to get on the bad side of a creature that can rip you to shreds with there teeth and claws, then burn your body to ash. even if that creature is smaller then you.
6301910 He is eye level with the Mane 6 in this story.
Just some clean up
I hope you really make, Rarity, work for her turn. Spike deserve the long overdue effort!
6300142 Spikes a fucking dragon he's supposed to have a harem and you can't change that I still don't see why rainbow had to be such a bitch about it spike could of burned her alive then and there if he wanted to.
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So, being a dragon gives him an excuse to be a horrible individual? To act worse than pretty much all of the villains we've seen so far, all without having to worry about punishment, simply because he's a dragon?
No. Dragons tend to think of themselves too highly anyway. You don't see ponies going around murdering the young ones of other species, which is what those teenage dragons told him to do. It's a good thing Spike didn't and doesn't act like most dragons, else they would do well to lock him up.
6322823 And threatening one of your friends isn't being a horrible individual? I don't know how Rainbow threatening Spike is deemed as being something a good individual would do. And I said he could if he wanted to which he doesn't because for some unfathomable reason he still views her as a friend even after she threatened him. Plus everypony doesn't go around threatening their friends.
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Threatening harm is the same as murder then?
Also, I said I like that somepony has a sense to keep Spike's ego in check. That doesn't mean I think what she did was something a good person would do. However, it was very much in character for her to put herself between her friends and someone who has the best position in the world to hurt them deeply. That was what I liked about the scene.
Nevermind that you appear to miss the point about her saying she wasn't going to do anything unless he did so first, or the fact that she kissed him right before that. Would you honestly see him as being in the right if Rainbow told him she'd go after him if he hurt their friends and he reacts with burning her to death? That seems... skewed.
6323096 My main point is she was being a bitch If someone did that to me while I had no intention of doing anything wrong I would outright call that person a dick and tell them to get the fuck out of my face I don't care if it would be a friend or something I'm not going to let someone talk to me like that when I didn't even do anything wrong. And neither should spike I hate when people try and make other people intimidated when they have done nothing wrong and don't deserve it. And one thing you need to realize is that Spike would never NEVER think about hurting his friends and that is what Rainbow should realize too.
MUST HAVE MORE!!!!!!! =P
OH SH*T!! He was set up.
Cant have a story with Pinky without her breaking the fourth wall... nice touch there.
Ha Teen Wolf reference lol, good show man/woman
Pinkie breaks the fourth wall,
Lincoln explains the fourth wall,
and Rick cracks the fourth wall.
Also, Spike interacts with the fourth wall.
Woah, four fourth wall mentions. That's like sixteen walls.
aww, the pic at the end of the chapter is gone..., 404 not found
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You were right. New link has been placed.