Man, Fluttershy was quite the eager mare this chapter and I'm happy that AJ and Pinkie also got a ride. The date with rarity was entertaining. The CMC's reactions throughout the chapter from being curious about Spike's polyamory to being traumatized made me smile. I'm happy that Spike finally got Celestia (I thought that she'd be the final girl) and simultaneously earned his wings in the process (I also didn't expected Celly to have experienced orgasms from female dragons and from eating cake...what a naughty pony you are Celestia ). Thanks for the chapter.
I still feel a bit jilted from not having at least one with Fluttershy (everything with her is kinda implied), but you really made it worth it when you surprised us with Celestia as the next mare that Spike got instead of Rarity. Nice twist!!
Also, it's awesome that he has wings, and not just that, he got them right after fucking!!! Remind me of another story where Spike finally got to sleep with Rarity because she wasn't in town the previous day, and the day after he woke up in Rarity's with her in his arms, and realized that he grew wings in the night. (He was already considered an adult physically, that Rarity turned out to be the key--literally and figuately--to unlocking his true adult form. The story is written by WebHead, but can't remember the name at the moment)
This chapter was awesome but is from what Tia said does that mean Twilight can't have kids? I hope not I want Alicorn/dragon hybrids. Through I find the Celestia as gone throw the change both sad and interasting story wise because it makes her and Luna less god like.
I like the story, and you have my fav. But I do have some small criticism. You can't seem to decide whether the ponies are anthro or pony. The most common example of this being "arms." You say the girls wrap their arms around objects, when if they are pony, they don't have arms. They have legs, four of them. Now, I do understand that can be a bit confusing, but if that is truly what you're going for, try using a different terminology such as forelegs (meaning the front legs of a four legged animal). It would avoid confusion. On the other hand, if you're going anthro... Hooves is my problem. Anthro typically doesn't have hooves, but it can. But then again, you never describe any of the girls as having breasts, so it just seems to me that you're going more for pony. Thus, a little terminology change would prevent the confusion. :P
So, the Crusaders finally found out what is REALLY going on? I wonder who is going to pay for their therapy? Or is Twilight finally going to find that brain bleach spell she's always looking for? And wow. I guess Red Bull isn't the only thing that can give you wings. A night with Celestia can also do the trick. I look forward to Spike finally completing his herd/harem and Rarity finding out about the great big set-up that got her there.
Looking at this approximately 3 months later, part of me still feels jilted a bit because all the **ahem** 'intimate scenes' with Fluttershy were pretty much implied. Just Fluttershy shows up, say "I need you to fuck me ragged again" in her own timid way, and then the next paragraph shows a abrupt scene change or it shows Spike dragging from some place of carnal conquest where he once again was defeated by the Element of Kindness (or should I say Element of Lust--apparently when her switch has flipped it takes a hell of a lot to turn that switch off).
But the rational part of me knows that there has to be a bit of story involved, and to be frank, if the story turned out like the majority of people would like for it to show up, it would pretty be sex scene after sex scene, with little actual story plot at all. Pretty sure that most would just tune out if it came to that. Plus I think I can understand why we don't know explicit details for every single encounter--1/ it takes too long, and 2/ after a while it could go get repetitive. The routes may be numerous but metaphorically it all leads to the same destination--needy pony pussy stuffed and creampied by large fulfilling dragonhood and the best (and only) dragonhood relatively available happens to live in Ponyville.
You can ignore or delete if you wish. This was just a sudden thought inspired by reading this fic again, and I just had to put it in writing. Thank you for your time .
"Ugh, why do I bother? Wait, didn't you say we had to meet somewhere else? And what's that smell?"
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"AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" the three Crusaders burst out of the clubhouse, screaming in horror and running off into the forested area to wipe their hooves on the ground. Sweetie Belle groaned in annoyance when her two friends resumed their argument afterward. Nice work 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏
"My grandfather told me that my great-great-great-great-great grandfather had seen this before. I thought it was only a myth. The Octo-Mane." Pure art 👌👌👌👌👌
Man, Fluttershy was quite the eager mare this chapter and I'm happy that AJ and Pinkie also got a ride. The date with rarity was entertaining. The CMC's reactions throughout the chapter from being curious about Spike's polyamory to being traumatized made me smile. I'm happy that Spike finally got Celestia (I thought that she'd be the final girl) and simultaneously earned his wings in the process (I also didn't expected Celly to have experienced orgasms from female dragons and from eating cake...what a naughty pony you are Celestia ). Thanks for the chapter.
I still feel a bit jilted from not having at least one with Fluttershy (everything with her is kinda implied), but you really made it worth it when you surprised us with Celestia as the next mare that Spike got instead of Rarity. Nice twist!!
Also, it's awesome that he has wings, and not just that, he got them right after fucking!!! Remind me of another story where Spike finally got to sleep with Rarity because she wasn't in town the previous day, and the day after he woke up in Rarity's with her in his arms, and realized that he grew wings in the night. (He was already considered an adult physically, that Rarity turned out to be the key--literally and figuately--to unlocking his true adult form. The story is written by WebHead, but can't remember the name at the moment)
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His 'ultimate prize' will the biggest, long-lasting, endless laid ever.
Hot chapter. And young mares should mind their young business unless they want to grow up too fast.
And, sex with a princess gives you wings! Who knew!
I bet rarity is gonna be the first to go prego, flutter is gonna be mad!
This chapter was awesome but is from what Tia said does that mean Twilight can't have kids? I hope not I want Alicorn/dragon hybrids. Through I find the Celestia as gone throw the change both sad and interasting story wise because it makes her and Luna less god like.
Spike is unstoppable
I like the story, and you have my fav. But I do have some small criticism. You can't seem to decide whether the ponies are anthro or pony. The most common example of this being "arms." You say the girls wrap their arms around objects, when if they are pony, they don't have arms. They have legs, four of them. Now, I do understand that can be a bit confusing, but if that is truly what you're going for, try using a different terminology such as forelegs (meaning the front legs of a four legged animal). It would avoid confusion.
On the other hand, if you're going anthro... Hooves is my problem. Anthro typically doesn't have hooves, but it can. But then again, you never describe any of the girls as having breasts, so it just seems to me that you're going more for pony. Thus, a little terminology change would prevent the confusion. :P
So, the Crusaders finally found out what is REALLY going on? I wonder who is going to pay for their therapy? Or is Twilight finally going to find that brain bleach spell she's always looking for?
And wow. I guess Red Bull isn't the only thing that can give you wings. A night with Celestia can also do the trick.
I look forward to Spike finally completing his herd/harem and Rarity finding out about the great big set-up that got her there.
Looking at this approximately 3 months later, part of me still feels jilted a bit because all the **ahem** 'intimate scenes' with Fluttershy were pretty much implied. Just Fluttershy shows up, say "I need you to fuck me ragged again" in her own timid way, and then the next paragraph shows a abrupt scene change or it shows Spike dragging from some place of carnal conquest where he once again was defeated by the Element of Kindness (or should I say Element of Lust--apparently when her switch has flipped it takes a hell of a lot to turn that switch off).
But the rational part of me knows that there has to be a bit of story involved, and to be frank, if the story turned out like the majority of people would like for it to show up, it would pretty be sex scene after sex scene, with little actual story plot at all. Pretty sure that most would just tune out if it came to that. Plus I think I can understand why we don't know explicit details for every single encounter--1/ it takes too long, and 2/ after a while it could go get repetitive. The routes may be numerous but metaphorically it all leads to the same destination--needy pony pussy stuffed and creampied by large fulfilling dragonhood and the best (and only) dragonhood relatively available happens to live in Ponyville.
You can ignore or delete if you wish. This was just a sudden thought inspired by reading this fic again, and I just had to put it in writing. Thank you for your time .
if it lands me a pair of wings i'd do it.
His first Red Bull
Did he fuck a redbull? Those wings say so.
"Ugh, why do I bother? Wait, didn't you say we had to meet somewhere else? And what's that smell?"
.................
"AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" the three Crusaders burst out of the clubhouse, screaming in horror and running off into the forested area to wipe their hooves on the ground. Sweetie Belle groaned in annoyance when her two friends resumed their argument afterward.
Nice work 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏
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Life is full of wonders. RedBull gives you wings
"My grandfather told me that my great-great-great-great-great grandfather had seen this before. I thought it was only a myth. The Octo-Mane."
Pure art 👌👌👌👌👌