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Ruined Plans

As Celestia looks at the results of her student running away she begins to worry of what will happen to her plans and how she'll make them work with a new student with less time.

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EvilZombieMinion

EvilZombieMinion #1 · Jun 7th, 2015 · · ·

6059983 Thank you for the feedback, I really appreciate you taking the time to leave it. I've gone back and taken your feedback and revised the chapter with what you left. I didn't do too much, I think, I didn't want what I did have to fall apart. I'll try harder with my next run at writing. Thanks again.

Bronzedragon

Bronzedragon #2 · Mar 5th, 2016 · · ·

just read this and found these. Good story, looks like a lead in to a longer one from a different point of view.

she used to raise her sun ( and ) lower her sister's moon
Scrolls that covered a wide range of topics were cluttered of the top of her desk [ on ]
to resolve Celestia's guilt at what so had to do [ she ]
that impressed Celestia and reinforcement her believe that Sunset Summer [ reinforced ]
Looking over the city then ( the ) surrounding country [ ?? ]
With that done both left the room and became the day. [ began ]
Soon the ground shook and a large crashed snapped everypony [ crash ]
a brief moment of lucidity at the magically surge [ magical ]