As soon as the elements of harmony were destroyed all three froze not knowing what to do now. Nightmare Moon looked scared at what she did. "I didn't mean to do that. I was just so frustrated that I just slammed down my hoofs and they broke. I'm...I'm...I'm..."
At that moment Nightmare Moon broke down crying while laying on the floor. Seeing this Celestia and Twilight ran up to her and Celestia began to try comfort her sister. "Luna I know you didn't mean to it is going to be okay."
At hearing this Nightmare Moon looked up at Celestia with tears in her eyes. "No it won't be Tia ever since I trended myself into Nightmare Moon it is like an another me is telling me to keep it night time internal and to hurt you and your student. Unless some miracle happens you two will have to get ride of me."
At hearing this Celestia hug tighter on her sister soon after the five other pony's that came with Twilight and Celestia started to come in to the room. Which at that moment Twilight knew what to do. "I know you didn't mean to brake them and in a way you didn't."
At hearing the the two sisters looked at Twilight with shocked looks on there faces but Twilight peeked on going. "Because the spirits of the Elements of Harmony are right here!" At hearing this Nightmare Moon stud up and gently pushed Celestia away because if Twilight was right there was a 50/50 chance that she was going back to the moon and she didn't want to take Celestia with her. So she stood and waited and see what will happen. "Applejack, who reassured me when I was in doubt, represents the spirit of honesty! Fluttershy, who tamed the manticore with her compassion, represents the spirit of kindness! Pinkie Pie, who banished fear by giggling in the face of danger, represents the spirit of laughter! Rarity, who calmed a sorrowful serpent with a meaningful gift, represents the spirit of generosity! And Rainbow Dash, who could not abandon her friends for her own heart's desire, represents the spirit of loyalty!"
At that moment the elements of harmony fixed them self's and went to who they were meant for as the two sisters looked at the floating elements only to see five at the both shouted out. "But where is the six element?!"
At hearing this Twilight smiled "It is made from the spark that came into my hear when I released how happy I was to see these five ponies. When I figured out that thees five are my firesides. They help me bring out the element of magic!"
Right at that moment all but Twilight's element became necklaces when Twilight's became a crown. That let out a rainbow that hit Nightmare Moon that didn't sent her back to the moon but trued her back into Princess Luna. But sadly not in her full strength but back to what she looked like when she and Celestia were teens. Her hair was a light blue and her coat was the same color as Twilight's hair. At seeing this Celestia ran up to Luna while crying. "Luna...Luna...Luna!"
Luna opened her eyes to see that she was not on the moon, but at the same time felt very week. "I'm still hear?"
Celestia smiled at Luna. "Yes, yes you are Luna and you look like you did when you were a teenager."
"What!"
Luna looked at herself and then looked the main 6 who were all looking at her five of them giving her odd looks since they didn't know what happened when it was just her and Celestia and Twilight. Twilight on the other hoof look like she was glade that this happened which she desisted to speck at that moment. "Well look on the bright side you aren't back on the moon and you can be with Celestia and start fresh."
I get the feeling it's almost wrapped up. But this was fun.
6885048 thanks
There is a few mistakes in the writeing but othere wise good
6885211 thank you for likeing it.
I am enjoy this story, my finger are cross hope twilight end up take care of luna as well in ponyville,
oh I just cant wait to see what discord reaction going to be or they reaction be if twilight become an alicorn
6895376 you'll just have to wait and see
6967898 I do have an editor but how he douse it is he has me post the story and then he looks at them when he can them PM's me the redo then I re-post it after I get it. Its just he hasn't sent me any redo's since chapter 2 and he has been off line for a few weeks. But thank you for you input and thanks for likeing it if you want to read another fanfic of mine that is being edited by some one else and that is edited before posted then cheek out A past that I did not see coming
6895537 kind of want rainbow dash to make a comment about twilight now have wings.....which both princess notice and mouth open wide because why not add to the confuse
7011151 you'll just have to wait and see
7011526 me knews, I just thought of that as I was rereading the story, today.
btw I most likey read this one and the other story once a week.
7011615 thanks
6967960 If that's the case, I'd be glad to help you clean up the story. I'm not an active writer but I like to think that I'm good at grammar and the like.
7014254 can you give me a few days to think about it I just sent him a pm earlyer today to see if he is okay since he has not been on for about 12 weeks now and I want to give him at lest 2 to 3 days to respond if he dosen't respond by then then maybe but if he douse respond then I'll talk to him about it. I do aperseat the offer but I do owe him the respeck to at lest try to talk to him about it. As I said if I don't get any respons in a few day and if he still douse nit loge on in any of those days I'll just have to think that he just gave up on mlp or something and I'll send him a email about what is going on just incase he douse go on a latter date. But for now I rewlly need to try and talk to him and think about it. Is that okay with you?
7014394 Of course! It's worth giving him a bit of time, he may just be busy. I know I've disappeared for long periods of time on websites before, without much warning.
7014447 okay I'll pm you as soon as eather I talk to him or I make up my mind
7014447 I just sent him a Pm talking about your offer of you editing the story say he has one more week to Pm me before I take up your offer. I'm sorry that it took me so long to send you this and that I'm asking you to wait a little bit more before I say yes to your offer but he still hasn't even loge in on fimfic so I don't know what to think and his last pm i sent him I had not told him about you yet so I thought I at let try to let him know about it and give him one more week before anything happens. again I'm sorry and I hope you can wait a bit more before I tell you my finale design.
7038991 Alright :)
7041509 sorry that I lost track of time because a lot tests I had to do but Mystic Solaris Knight never Pm'ed me back infarct he hasn't been on at all I'm just going to have to think that he is not longer into mlp and won't come back on or something so if you still want to be the editor you can.
I think it be funny if some how twilight end up with all of Luna magic form her teenage and up......and somehow combo of both alicorn magic force twilight to become an alicorn ,
7166175 thanks for you input
7166465 you most welcome, I think it be funny if the 3 of them live in ponyville try to live simi normal life, I can so picture luna tell Trixie that twilight is far more powerfully and skill and that what cause Trixie to call twilight out to test her magic, or any of the other cannon stuff that could happen because the teenage princess and filly princess are the one who cause the issue.....
7181224
just reread this story,
been thinking and end the story with something like they live with twilight in ponyville then start a squeale with happen canon but with both princess as they younger self be good idea, anyway great story.
be funny if somepony from the school board come to twilight place ask why the filly she take care of is not in school, and force Princess Celitia to go to school along with the CMC would be funny..
7313542 will think about it thank you for your input
7313590 your most welcome,
poke my had in "hmmmm I feel like an update is comeing'
7412927 nope not at the moment I'm at a writers block on the next chapter so might be some time for the next chapter sorry
You Get A thumbs Up form me courtasy of Sir SiRington The 3rd. Aka this Fan fiction reading Cat lover.
7434852 okay