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Alone

The element of honesty is completely alone. She cannot figure out why, and it becomes even harder as her memory fades with each wrong action she commits in attempt to escape and find a way home, but will she get out before her memory fades away.

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Marokk

Marokk #1 · Jun 1st, 2015 · · · Day 1 ·

An interesting premise for a story. Seems pretty good, some errors here and there.

"I was too frighten and scared..." This should be frightened.

"I just pray that I'm being silly and suborn..." Should be stubborn, I assume that's what you meant.

I'm glad to see a new story posted with a different idea. I hope you can make it into something really special and unique. Good luck.

Sincerely, Your friendly neighborhood brony guy A.K.A. Marokk.

Pecan Pencil #2 · Jun 1st, 2015 · · · Day 1 ·

6044622 Thank you for notifying me about my errors and the support is really appreciated, Thank you.

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