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AppleJack's grandmother Granny Smith, passes away as the trotters start to come. Big Mac is nowhere to be found and AppleJack worries about what's ahead and how she'll do withought her Granny Smith.
Will she find Big Macintosh? Where will she go?
Aloth of other things will go on in later chapters.
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Exiled from Light

Exiled from Light #1 · Apr 15th, 2015 · · 1 ·

I see spelling and grammatical errors.

ElementOfDestiny

ElementOfDestiny #2 · Apr 15th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I like the cover art! But, as for the story...ya might need to get an editor...just sayin to help

Comment posted by Pecan Pencil deleted Apr 15th, 2015

Pecan Pencil

Pecan Pencil #4 · Apr 15th, 2015 · · ·

5868333 I understand what you're saying, and I appericiate the advice but I don't know how to get an editor, can you tell me how?

Darkshade666

Darkshade666 #5 · Apr 15th, 2015 · · ·

I like it

Darkshade666

Darkshade666 #6 · Apr 15th, 2015 · · ·

But line small mistake: walker/trotter levels decrease by night not day

ElementOfDestiny

ElementOfDestiny #7 · Apr 16th, 2015 · · ·

If you go under the "group" tab. Search for "Proofreaders Group" there you will find a bunch of proofreaders and editors. Just read the rules and all that and there will be a link to click on that'll have a list full of them. Just click on one that is accepting and PM them. Tip: PM a couple of them don't rely on just one to get back to you... Hope this helped!

Pecan Pencil