From a strange merchant I got the powers from one of my favorite Video games plus my favorite mythological creature. Great right? Well nothing is free and power is expensive. I lost my humanity, my gender, and my world. This had better be fun.
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We see they have prodded at the home to the bearers whom are heroes to the land this displaced be from, though we wonder how the sisters would react to what magic she learned from our little doom. Other events such as 'sieging' Ponyville where the heroes call home, will be quite a large bit of news, we wonder how Nobility or others will react to this 'mishmash' group of terrorists? Or even the creatures revealed under the sway of 'Lady Rin' that has been seen leading them, as a very old Evil known as Grogar has used the undead like this before.
Let Hope Ax never meets those guys or well his going to eat them. XD
Scarlet Crusade by another name but with higher brain functions but still a mindless suicide squad. Gonna make them awfully mad when they realize they keep adding to Rin's forces
And hit Rainbow in the head with a hammer a few times, might help with her stupidity. Doubtful but there's little chance otherwise of her understanding what's going on.
Also, Twilight is a Grey? I thought she was a unicorn
6272258 Yep. This was the chapter where something particularly unpleasant hit the fan.
This story gets absolutely painful to read with the vast number of spelling and/or grammar errors. A proof reader/editor would definitely be a good idea. Also don't use a phrase if you don't know its actual meaning and your just assuming you do.
mono e mono. 0
You used this in your story, which is spelled wrong as its properly spelled mano a mano. The meaning also means hand to hand, in the context of how you used it, it would suggest you meant man to man. Considering the guard where you used this phrase would be a pony neither hand nor man would be proper usage in the story.
Now as to the story itself, it's good. I feel the story is consistent without jumping around and causing confusion. The speed at some of the points feels a tad rushed, but its well within an enjoyable rate as far as I feel inclined to say.
6272281 I'm sorry but where dose it say Twilight is a Grey?
6276735 Implied when it was revealed that Twilight had a fetish for anal probes
the breaks and let - brakes
puling - pulling
Hydra thy make - they
against hour righteous - our
haft - have
plaice - palace
6273079 You should use "You're"
6276735 Does
You're: A contraction. This means "You + Are" in shorthand. Anytime you see this word, you're saying 'you are'.
Your: Possessive. That's "YOUR" stuff. No it's not mine, it's yours! Yes yours!
Cheesus Crust, Lord of Pizza and Savior of Toppings it's annoying when this error just will not stop.
If you can't keep them straight then stop using the contraction, spell out 'you are' each time, and only use the possessive form.
After the cracked out previous chapters this is a nice change of pace.
6272281
This please
Octavia one of equestria’s best cello players.
R.I.P
Rest In Peace
M.I.A
Murdered in action
D.Y.W.B
Do you wanna bet!?