From a strange merchant I got the powers from one of my favorite Video games plus my favorite mythological creature. Great right? Well nothing is free and power is expensive. I lost my humanity, my gender, and my world. This had better be fun.
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Is Harmony's name going to be Willy while on the job?
Palutena: *facepalms at Harmonies kid*
Seriously? That Demigod really needed a wakeup call... Though I guess he did get One, in the last few minutes of his life.
Then again, considering that Harmony had the brilliant idea to name her Son Hoof Note, was just asking for her child to Die a horrid death!
Then again, Harmony isn't that bright, it seems... Not to mention that she never taught her Son how to properly use his powers.
I can't even really feel anything for Hoof Note even though I'm trying to, that was just far to pathetic but considering his mother it is understandable.
It'd be funnier if her punishment was to work for Rin.
i'm about to start reading...Hella.
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It happens, when it's not your native language mate, doesn't change it's true.
I have to say, a vary good chapter. Keep up the good work. I wood love it if you put out more chapters more often.
Dragonfox
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Just something I remembered about while reading this story...
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I finished the reading.
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...Uhm, okay? I mean, yeah, I get it, wordplay is fun. And no one's contesting your ability to insert random things. Curveballs do kind of play a vital role in keep things interesting. So it's an undead rubber bouncy ball. It's funny.
So does Rin's use of Horny count as reckless endangerment and murder/ warcrimes by proxy, or what?
Actually, this line of thought is fascinating. A group of people go to a field with the intent to kill each other, within established conditions called the law of war. If you send someone to war knowing he's liable to violate said laws, does that make you culpable?
In either case. You're going to go through the whole story accusing Rin of every little pretext under the sun, and then you go for the cliche of, 'oh, the bad guy isn't really as bad as you think, because here's this vital piece of information that was intentionally omitted'... Yeah, no thanks. I really think you should've either made her out to be just another bigoted bitch, or made some kind of hint of foreshadowing beforehand. Personal feelings aside, "Hoof Note" was not a funny joke.
And if you were going for a two-sided perspective on making negative assumptions based on incomplete facts, the Goodlies were zealots that shaped the facts to fit their views despite anything Rin proved through action, while Whoremony actually showed who she was through her consistent behavior so far, despite everything that you were saying to justify her actions now.
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Sorry you don't like the timing of that. There are several things I thought of before starting this story that I had a hard time finding the right place to put it. And there were some things that I just couldn't so were left out entirely.
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Writing is re-writing. Less than a quarter of everything I wrote went in. The rest I had to send to the chopping block for recognizing one oversight or another. I'm not saying you should suddenly become a dedicated writing genius, this is a common issue that most writers just ignore and blow past that I personally have developed issue with. Personally I eitherremember why my next chapter is sounding wrong or I don't and just rewrite the whole damn thing aiming blindly to fix what I messed up; I'm also going to be linking my chapters' doc files around before updating my own story so I might possibly get a second opinion from readers. Blogs don't seem to get much attention, maybe I could post the link on a group or discord or something.
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All that aside, this is one of the better fics I've read on this site.
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Thank you.
I think this might be my favourite displaced story, but like all others, it suffers from weird e-mo displaced from other stories.
I would absolutely love to read this without the crazy, pacing breaking displaced insert, since without them, it's a hilarious, read and i fin d myself skipping the cameo chapters anyway. Kudos.
Missed this one sorry bout that kind of hard not to sorry guess I have to add thrid read through to my editing checklist