From a strange merchant I got the powers from one of my favorite Video games plus my favorite mythological creature. Great right? Well nothing is free and power is expensive. I lost my humanity, my gender, and my world. This had better be fun.
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... Princess Rin Op, Plz Nerf! Now that I got that out of my system, she is buried in paperwork, isn't she? Bureaucracy just can't work unless it consumes three miles of forest every other day in just paper. Also, I don't blame Rin for being afraid of the position. The idea of it is enough to terrify any one in the know.
6341364 How is she OP? She spent most of the chapter running away and the changeling queen was weak because her plans were learned by mistake before she could build up enough power to do the job.
6341426 Your new to the whole completely unjustified nerf request thing, aren't you? Also, she was labelled a princess on skill and ability, but God is she hating life now.
I have always hated Xavior's brother, Always stuck me as a self-entitled jack-ass. And yes I'm talking Jug-head to those that don't know that he's been put down as Professor's brother in quite a few X-Men this and thats
Some errors and one of them I'd just liked clarified.
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6342066 Fixed. and as for the one you wanted explained when I write and make a mistake the computer will try to correct my spelling on its own which results in words being replaced by other words. Its annoying. it was suppose to say I will find you.
6342449 Nice, it makes it much smoother to read. You have a proof reader/editor on a regular basis or do you just do it all yourself?
6341627 I think the brother's name was Cain Marko. I know that eventually in the comic he starts to lose his juggernaut powers because part of what makes his powers work is being a right bastard(evil) and he ends up attempting to give up his evil ways and begins to lose his powers which ends up nearly costing him his life.
6342460 I do have an editor but he's also working on some other stories so I'm dishing out faster then he can fix.
6342468 Okay, more than I knew before All I really know, besides what you put down was he was supposed to be the Prof's brother and now that you've brought it up I do think I remember Xavior calling him Cain in the cartoon. Not sure though, been more than a few years since I've seen any of them
6341364 did you forget she might be able to replicate the shadow clone juts from naruto. Wouldn't surprise me if she can. Though celestia's regalia definitely shocked me. They were weights! I mean really that was unexpected.
6349127 ... Why use clones when you can just use tendrils and carefully moving tails?
6349127 No Rin can't do the shadow clone. The illusion copies simply copies everything the original sais and dose and will always stay the same distance from each other no mater what until they are dispelled or destroyed. And Rin already mentioned Celestia's training weights in the chapter The Death of Octavia. She asked if Celestia was using them and Celestia answered every day.
6349208 yeah but you never said what the weights WERE so I thought they were regular weights. Thats why they came unexpected to me. Who would ever think regalia can be weights!
6349262 yes that was intentional. when I first mentioned it in that chapter I made it vague on purpose because I had planned to turn it into a fat joke where enemies would try to abduct her and be unable to lift her weight but the opportunity didn't show up before she came into contact with something strong enough to warrant removing them.
This is what Ax was doing.
I wonder if you could do more sparring matches like the one you did here?
And really good chapter by the way.