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Retro

Retro is an 18 year old gamer with some nasty habits and a certain girl in mind. when one occurrence leads to another, he decides to go after her.
contains teen themes

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Ithrex

Ithrex #1 · May 11th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I don't think you're supposed to have rape in a Teen fic with no sex tag...

GamingBrony101

GamingBrony101 #2 · May 11th, 2015 · 1 · 1 ·

5965652 i wouldn't go that far, seeing as how he's willing

Ithrex

Ithrex #3 · May 11th, 2015 · · ·

5965699 Kidnapping him, tying him up and putting duct tape over his mouth without knowing of his attraction towards her...
Also, I don't think ~~hinting at~~ proclaiming an upcoming orgy didn't help.

GamingBrony101

GamingBrony101 #4 · May 12th, 2015 · · ·

5966331 I suppose it's down to the reader's own interpretation. to me, or rather how i wanted it to look was that In terms of the kidnapping This was him dreaming. So his subconscious created the scenario. The same goes for the rope and duct tape. I'd say something about the last comment but one of the words is blocked.

Ithrex