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What I Never Told You...

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For a while now, Applejack has had something really embarrassing up her sleeve that she hasn't told anypony. One day, Pinkie Pie needs Applejacks help to gather cherries for her new cupcake recipe. Is this the perfect time for Applejack to tell Pinkie the very important secret?

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Lightning Crystal

Lightning Crystal #1 · May 14th, 2015 · · ·

i approve

DiscordFan

DiscordFan #2 · May 14th, 2015 · · ·

Short and sweet!

dream1990

dream1990 #3 · May 14th, 2015 · · ·

R3beccaFiction is they more chapters for this story

Vanilla_Foxx

Vanilla_Foxx #4 · May 14th, 2015 · · ·

5975244 I'm still deciding which is why I have the "incomplete" on the front. I might add a bonus chapter so stay tuned ^.^

dream1990

dream1990 #5 · May 14th, 2015 · · ·

5975471 please add a bonus chapter for this story

Vanilla_Foxx

Vanilla_Foxx #6 · May 15th, 2015 · · ·

5975498 Okay I'm on it

dream1990

dream1990 #7 · May 15th, 2015 · · ·

5982045 okay

AngelWing456

AngelWing456 #8 · May 4th, 2016 · · ·

*Clears throat* Attention, fetus me. I am here to make some improvements to your writing.

"I kinda sorta..." Pinkie rubbed her hooves in circles in the dirt underneath her. "Need your help pinking some." She finished.

How do you "pink" cherries? OMG, little me! It's PICK not PINK you bimbo.

"Aw, here it is," Pinkie hopped down a dirt trail leading down a small hill that led to nothing but acres and acres of cherries. She hopped all that way down and looked up at Apple jack. "Hurry up!

There is no space in-between Apple and jack!

When the two were finally in the middle of one of the cherry fields, they both quickly equipped their baskets. Applejack used the same basket as she had carried her workload of apples just about and hour before. Pinkie crouched down and pulled a couple cherries off their firm stems.

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