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Twilight is right that neither of them "own" their prospective interests, but it always seems like that's a fancy way to say "You aren't allowed to try to win over them, and you're not allowed to be unhappy that they decided to cast you aside." And, of course, at this point the deck is mostly stacked against Discord, and Spike is unintentionally egging Rarity on, so it looks... at least superficially that if they did nothing, then they would simply lose the ponies they loved to hormones.
But they're still intruding and being possessive over people who aren't theirs.
So, I feel for them, but because they're doing the wrong thing I also get the feeling karma's gonna (and maybe should) bite them in the ass and leave them alone.
It's tearin' me apart!
im just hopping for Discord and shy to fuck like rabbits!
hell i want a whole orgy :P
Wait, what? I thought heat was the maturation equivalent of a girl's period (i.e. after the first, you can make babies). If Flutters is only getting her first now, that means she'd only be a filly on the cusp of marehood, and way to young to be in this kind of story, let alone involved in the things that happen in canon.
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... ;D (I refuse to say more but patience will absolutely be rewarded)
.... Oh shit....
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well i vote for an orgy!
that way discord gets more than one mare to fuck into the ground :P
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Pretty sure that he meant that it was her first heat of the season, not that it was her first heat ever. Unless his magical cartoon horses have a different biology from what we're used to.
Haha!...
Wait.
Theeeere we go.
We... haven't really seen much of this side of Twilight.
You make an excuse for her stupendous over-reaction right here:
I don't really remember Twilight having any trouble with this. I may have missed it, but I don't recall any 'Twilight is getting stressed' subplot.
Sure, this kind of OTT actions is known to come from Twilight when she is stressed.... but this is something that I feel was pulled out of the box last minute.
Now, another thing I'd love to mention, is that:
Perfect. Spike raises a perfectly logical point. Twilight is vulnerable to those.
....Annnnd, he lost it. This sentence, right here, was SO stupid. So, so stupid. Spike could have won the argument before.
Firstly, he did say pretty much exactly that. And secondly, Twilight's words were rather justified. They were not brutal. It's clear that Spike does not think Rarity is an object, so, Twilight's jab is untrue.
...Making her irrational and short-tempered?
Huh, that may have just cleared up all the problems I have with this chapter...
Plan to do what? Escape? Prove Twilight wrong? Or...
ENFORCE THE FLASHLIGHT SHIP!??
Also, LUNA you for Twilight X Flash
You failed to realize something.
Flash couldn't have possibly cast a spell- no. Want to know why?
HE IS A PEGASUS. PEGUSI CANNOT CAST SPELLS OF ANY KIND.
Not much smaller... but I'll give you that one.
EDIT:
Maybe you did remember.
Rape whistle.
On another note, why did he not give this whistle to her at the beginning.
I think you need to give your stories a quick once-over to check for plot holes, like this one. There are quite a few of them.
EDIT:
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Well shit.
You just owned me.
HAH!
Well, jokes aside, I am very, very excited for this "Orgy" 6529097 has been teasing.
Aww, Discord and Spike broke up! They could have had something beautiful together.
Entertaining story, I'm enjoying it! And good for you with sticking to your guns, determined for a good story with character development and plot and all that makes a good story worthwhile. Respect, man. Respect.
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Flash Sentry did have magic. It was the magic of being male. With testerone. ;)
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Daww. Thanks dude :)
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lol im not the author! i just said i wanted it XD
FLASH!
CHEESE!
BROCK-LEE?
DISCORD!
THUNDER?
Precious scales!
Gerbel?
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So this heat stuff it's sorta special isn't it? bet your ruby hearts on it!
post it note: damn this is getting fun. . .
Eh ignore those PMs. This is one of the best fics on this site I've read so far. Everyone is really in character and the story is hilarious. Keep it up!
I actually think you should be applauded for standing your ground here. And everyone else, let them do their story their way.
Losing my shit a lot with this, laughing my ass off, and yet also like son of a bitch that sucks. A very enjoyable read, so far.