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OOOOH!
this is getting better and better with each chapter!
and omg will you two just fuck already! we already know its cumming! among other things!
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hahaha... I see what you did there. :D
DISCORD NO!
Oh ho this is going to be intersting
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Ah Spikey he be an old 'family goomba' tell em Victor sent ya. . .
It's great to be the Don' .
Omg everything's going to blow apart XD
*THROWING POPCORN EVERYWHERE* THIS IS A HUGE DISASTER!!!!
This fic is some hysterical comedy. It isn't that often that I find a fic that makes me laugh out loud, but this tickles me mightily. Makes me laugh out loud several times a chapter.
A few mistakes here and there though, something another proofreading might catch. The only one that really sticks out is your mistaking of "prostate", the organ that you can tickle just right on males and "prostrate" which is the word you're looking for when someone is low on the ground. And considering the risque comedy of the story, seeing prostate there is unintentionally hilarious.
Now, time to read the next chapter of this hilarious series of disasters.