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Oh god.
The times Fluttershy has gotten angry.....
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Of all the stories I have ever read, this is the most anticlimactic one-by far. That's not a bad thing, though, if there are more chapters incoming.
Anyway, this story seems like it could go on forever at this rate
I absolutely died at the wrestling with his paw bit.
But ooooh shit. Now what? Poor Fluttershy. Poor Discord. OTOH, it might be better for them both to make love when they're a bit less...under the influence!
This is quite a lot of fun. I must admit it does feel just a bit rapey to me, considering most of Fluttershy's thoughts kinda amount to "no". But it's not so bad that I can't stomach it.
A few comments:
"Her mind was completely blown to the point where the 3rd person narrative persona had to step in to try to explain what was going on until she could finally Oh my goodness! Oh my goodness! Is he kissing me?? I can’t breathe!" Please don't break the fourth wall like that. Your writing is better than that.
" Fluttershy giggled as she got into a catcher’s position. “Throw me the key and I will catch it and unlock the door.” I burst out laughing here, mostly because I immediately thought of what that is slang for, along with "receiver"... But then again, it is your fault for getting my mind in the gutter.
"Discord froze as a cold chill seized his body. His eyes shot open and he pulled back from the prostate pegasus quickly." It is "prostrate". That means "lying". "Prostate" without the "r" is the little thing men get cancer in... Ya know, in the back?
Fun though.
Good writing, but he almost raped her, which is not cool, not cool at all. I guess we can say they were both not in their right minds, but even so...
Booty drums..... not bad.......This story is really funny but also really sexy...I enjoy it greatly
Damn you, i wished he entered her. I was feeling heat myself because of Fluttercord love but i guessed someone says it true he almost raped her lol
AND THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS FLUTTERCORD SEX!! i'll keep read next chapter
did...did he just rape her?YOU DO NOT RAPE MY FAVORITE PONY!