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Huston, we have a problem.
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Language warning? Do you mean improper grammar or impending profanities? (it's so wonderful to be able to type again. Casts are RIDICULOUS) :)
6507776 Well, obviously for the blatant profanity. I wasn't too sure about the site's rules regarding that, but I seem to remember something about the fact that the comments must be of the same rating as the fic itself.
Anyways, this is quite the chapter, if I do say so myself. I really look forward to the epic chewing-out those two are going to get.
But, unless I recall incorrectly, isn't Discord's magic far more powerful than Twilight's. I mean, only with the elements of harmony did the mane 6 manage to defeat him. I highly doubt he would be helpless to Twilight's levitation and teleportation magic.
Seems like a bit of a plot hole to me.
However, if discord deliberately let himself get captured... well, then I guess we'll have to see, won't we?
It really is a failure on all fronts, isn't it? Fluttershy is being hit on by Brock, apparently, and is falling for him, Rarity is... well it's less like she is falling for Garble, so maybe things aren't as bad? Garble certaibly hasn't been interested in her yet...
... And now, I wonder what's going to happen as the boys are caught.
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I actually tried to minimize profanity unless I felt it was necessary/really funny. I may have accidentally let some slip in that I didn't catch during proofreading. I will be more careful in the future. -_-
Also yes the plot holes are mighty. Reasoning was Twilight is now an Alicorn and therefore had access to more powerful magic. Discord was in a "vulnerable" emotional state and could be caught off guard (theoretically)
ah
beautiful BEAUTIFUL chaos
if discord was the one watching he would be weeping with joy.
now i cant wait to see what happens next! i vote for ether 3some on the alley OR them knocking out twilight to keep her from talking.
They were caught so quickly, too hahaha. I really wasn't expecting Garble to do that! Protect Rarity, I mean. Though it would have been totally funny to hear his thoughts when the girl Dragon punched him- probably would have made him like her more!