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Burning Sky Cloud


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Suspicion spreads among the Mane 6 and friends as they attempt to survive the town killings of Salem. Who can be trusted? Who cannot? Can the killers be brought to justice before the remaining survivors are taken in their place? Find out in this Town of Salem crossover.

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alright, you have my attention. I do enjoy playing Town of Salem but I never knew it was something that could be crossed over with My Little Pony, I'll see where this goes.


A few criticisms (Don't take this personally, I'm just stating my opinion):

you might want to add the 'alternate universe' tag since this takes place outside the canon universe.

I really hope this is just a game all along because not trusting someone like Celestia is a little out of character.

you spelled consigliere wrong

There's too many names at the beginning, it's too confusing, I'm having a hard time remembering who's in this, in other words, instead of saying what kind of ponies there are, just say who is there.

Overrall, not bad.


Also since I'm here, how about this for some point in the future:

Have the framer visit the jester

Have the jailor jail the vigilante

Have the bodyguard guard the escort

Have the serial killer attack the Godfather

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Yeah this is nothing more than just a game. It has nothing to do with how everyone is in the original MLP universe. It's an MLP version of Town of Salem. It's all meant to be hilarity. So I hope none of the characters are ruined for you.

As for the characters themselves, you have the Mane 6 which consist of Twilight, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Applejack, Pinkie Pie, and Fluttershy. Spike and Big Mac make eight with Celestia, Luna, and Cadence making eleven. Shining Armor makes twelve with Zecora, Sunset Shimmer, and Discord making the fifteen survivors of the story.

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No characters were ruined, I was just mildly confused

Thank you for explaining that, I shall await more in the future

Though a few things haven't been made clear

If you are going to have the audience controll the characters you should at least say who's left rather than who's dead, perhaps include the 'role list' in the author's comments or something? Or is this like the all any?

The werewolf I can understand, but how did the arsonist die? Isn't he immune?

And a final question, will you be including the new roles that are arriving in the future? The Vampire, the Vampire Hunter, and the Forger?

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