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Jet Burn and the Doctor

Follow Doctor Whooves on his latest adventure as he comes across a Pegasus that leads to a chain of events to unfold as they travel space and time. Familiar ponies accompany them upon their journeys as they uncover a looming danger threatening to destroy the universe itself. First of five series.

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Episode 1: Jet Burn and the Doctor · 10th Aug 2014 · 2,845 words
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Chapter 2 · 7th Sep 2014 · 2,692 words
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Tits and shit

Tits and shit #1 · Aug 15th, 2014 · · · Episode 1: Jet Burn and the Doctor ·

This is a great story! The grammar and plot is perfect! I praise you my friend! Keep up the great work.

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Princess_Luna_ #2 · Aug 15th, 2014 · · · Episode 1: Jet Burn and the Doctor ·

Wow! This is just, awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Lunar Dusk

Lunar Dusk #3 · Aug 15th, 2014 · · · Episode 1: Jet Burn and the Doctor ·

Good job sir! A pretty spot on portrayal of the Doctor, even though he sounded like he aged a bit. The only real problem I have is the classic "show, don't tell", which I'm sure is only gonna be for the first chapter. So gg Mr.Sir