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So many dislike ls and absolutely no comment, um..... why is that?

5911456 I'm not really sure, what was your opinion of this story? I wish those who didn't like it at least left a comment as to why so I can either fix it or build on those and make sure to make it better.

5911555 How am I sick? Granted I can be a little twisted, but I don't consider myself sick.

Comment posted by thunder_storm91 deleted Apr 27th, 2015

Ok.... What happen? From sexuall torture to get released. I can't follow the story ;<(

5911723 If you noticed in the first chapter the portal had changed colors last minute before they fell through so they didn't go where their captor had originally planned. Remember they all seen a lady who told them it was okay to let go that they'd be safe and that's how they ended up where they are now. At least that should be in there.

More will be revealed later.

why so many dislikes? i liked it.

5925167 I can't figure that out, I really wish they would've left a review about it so I'd at least be able to fix what they thought was wrong with it or at least learn from this since it's my first fanfiction. I'm glad you liked it though :pinkiesmile:

5925167 Me too. I guess it's just too messed up for some people. :trollestia:

....hmmm this art stile for the story....its seems unique
ive never seen the Mane6 like that......(and by that i mean in this version ive seen plenty of anthro human....)

He looked different from any stallion she had ever seen.

I know that smell...that kind of smelly smell that smells...smelly...it can only be...

Gary Stu....

"Why you are quite correct, my dear. I am not a pony, in fact I am something far worse that your friend over there."

She didn't say anything, so apparently he's a functional telepath as well as more dangerous than Discord.

It was insanity for her to feel this much pleasure, especially since she was being held prisoner.

Unless the tentacle excretes an aphrodesiac or they've been drugged with such in their sleep it shouldn't be any more pleasurable than a good solid cock.

Things were about to get scary in Equestria and Rainbow Dash, along with rest of the Mane 6, Celestia and Luna, were in for a very bumpy ride. After being transported through a portal to a new world, they would be thrust into a world filled with turmoil, war, death and new found love. Friends would be made and lost, love connections found and a life filled with new adventures laid ahead of them all.

That's quite the...inaccurate description of things thus far.

"Time for you lovely ladies to go to a new world. Where you will help my Prince take the thrown that is rightfully his!"

Ah, there we go. So we just needed an unnecessary gratuitous tentacle rape scene because...reasons. Also, unless this is one of those fics where you can cut yourself on the edge Mr. Prince really should be in for a very, very unpleasant surprise. Though given the attitude of this first chapter nothing the heroes do to make their situation better besides giving in to the dark rapey ways of their captors will work.


Thanks unforeshadowed mysterious lady out of nowhere!

"A powerful seraph,"

ser·aph
ˈserəf
noun
an angelic being, regarded in traditional Christian angelology as belonging to the highest order of the ninefold celestial hierarchy, associated with light, ardor, and purity.

So she's literally the only rank below the christian God? ... good to know I guess.

Your wings are strong enough to make winds strong enough to knock an entire army on their rumps and your heart is large and full of love, yet as strong as Mithril.

Holy shit, I was being facetious, but damn it must be the case.

He believed that since she was not of royal birth she held no claim to the throne what so ever.

Hmmm, pointy ears and arrogance or So bright and brilliant that looking at her is supposed to literally fry you to death.

Yeah, let it go man, this isn't a fight you should logically win. Like you would need the biggest ass pull authorship can buy.

He sounded sad, almost hurt even.

Red Thoran is spy!

Lord of Chaos

A draconequus. Lord of Chaos is just a title.

“Rainbow Dash is your sister.”

Sure, why not?

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