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So many dislike ls and absolutely no comment, um..... why is that?
5911456 I'm not really sure, what was your opinion of this story? I wish those who didn't like it at least left a comment as to why so I can either fix it or build on those and make sure to make it better.
u r sick mang
5911555 How am I sick? Granted I can be a little twisted, but I don't consider myself sick.
Ok.... What happen? From sexuall torture to get released. I can't follow the story ;<(
5911723 If you noticed in the first chapter the portal had changed colors last minute before they fell through so they didn't go where their captor had originally planned. Remember they all seen a lady who told them it was okay to let go that they'd be safe and that's how they ended up where they are now. At least that should be in there.
More will be revealed later.
why so many dislikes? i liked it.
5925167 I can't figure that out, I really wish they would've left a review about it so I'd at least be able to fix what they thought was wrong with it or at least learn from this since it's my first fanfiction. I'm glad you liked it though
5925167 Me too. I guess it's just too messed up for some people.
5928220 I'm glad you liked!
....hmmm this art stile for the story....its seems unique
ive never seen the Mane6 like that......(and by that i mean in this version ive seen plenty of anthro human....)
I know that smell...that kind of smelly smell that smells...smelly...it can only be...
Gary Stu....
She didn't say anything, so apparently he's a functional telepath as well as more dangerous than Discord.
Unless the tentacle excretes an aphrodesiac or they've been drugged with such in their sleep it shouldn't be any more pleasurable than a good solid cock.
That's quite the...inaccurate description of things thus far.
Ah, there we go. So we just needed an unnecessary gratuitous tentacle rape scene because...reasons. Also, unless this is one of those fics where you can cut yourself on the edge Mr. Prince really should be in for a very, very unpleasant surprise. Though given the attitude of this first chapter nothing the heroes do to make their situation better besides giving in to the dark rapey ways of their captors will work.
Thanks unforeshadowed mysterious lady out of nowhere!
ser·aph
ˈserəf
noun
an angelic being, regarded in traditional Christian angelology as belonging to the highest order of the ninefold celestial hierarchy, associated with light, ardor, and purity.
So she's literally the only rank below the christian God? ... good to know I guess.
Holy shit, I was being facetious, but damn it must be the case.
Hmmm, pointy ears and arrogance or So bright and brilliant that looking at her is supposed to literally fry you to death.
Yeah, let it go man, this isn't a fight you should logically win. Like you would need the biggest ass pull authorship can buy.
Red Thoran is spy!
A draconequus. Lord of Chaos is just a title.
Sure, why not?