So many dislike ls and absolutely no comment, um..... why is that?

5911456 I'm not really sure, what was your opinion of this story? I wish those who didn't like it at least left a comment as to why so I can either fix it or build on those and make sure to make it better.

5911555 How am I sick? Granted I can be a little twisted, but I don't consider myself sick.

Ok.... What happen? From sexuall torture to get released. I can't follow the story ;<(

5911723 If you noticed in the first chapter the portal had changed colors last minute before they fell through so they didn't go where their captor had originally planned. Remember they all seen a lady who told them it was okay to let go that they'd be safe and that's how they ended up where they are now. At least that should be in there.

More will be revealed later.

5925167 I can't figure that out, I really wish they would've left a review about it so I'd at least be able to fix what they thought was wrong with it or at least learn from this since it's my first fanfiction. I'm glad you liked it though

5928220 I'm glad you liked!

"A powerful seraph,"

ser·aph
ˈserəf
noun
an angelic being, regarded in traditional Christian angelology as belonging to the highest order of the ninefold celestial hierarchy, associated with light, ardor, and purity.

So she's literally the only rank below the christian God? ... good to know I guess.

Your wings are strong enough to make winds strong enough to knock an entire army on their rumps and your heart is large and full of love, yet as strong as Mithril.

Holy shit, I was being facetious, but damn it must be the case.

He believed that since she was not of royal birth she held no claim to the throne what so ever.

Hmmm, pointy ears and arrogance or So bright and brilliant that looking at her is supposed to literally fry you to death.

Yeah, let it go man, this isn't a fight you should logically win. Like you would need the biggest ass pull authorship can buy.

He sounded sad, almost hurt even.

Red Thoran is spy!

Lord of Chaos

A draconequus. Lord of Chaos is just a title.

“Rainbow Dash is your sister.”

Sure, why not?