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What no comments? So few likes? Sure there's bad spelling but dam this is looking like a good story so far
This was good
If someone is a willing "slave" (and i use that term VERY hesitantly as i prefer the word companion) then you need to take care of that person
8190142 Well thank you for the complement. And I try my best.
Its difficult to read with this many errors, but I like it so far. You really need someone to go through and correct things for you though.
Story's good, premise is good, only thing you need is a proofreader.
You actually managed to work in more-or-less realistic sex, an understanding of what hurts women in sex, and real feels into a smut setting. Wow. That is very impressive!
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Well thanks, but I can’t take all the credit, as my pal helped me with a few things while writing this.
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Personally i follow the this is mine it is beutiful and shall remain that way, if you dickbrains think to fuck with that i will hang you with your own intestines mentality.
I really hope he frees here of the collar and gets others/rescue them from the caribou.
This is incredibly hard to read with lots of errors. I think you need to go over these earlier chapters and fix them
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Honestly you’re right, but as of now writing these can be tricky. But a few rewrites might be needed. I won’t deny that.
So im thinking about coming back to check it out again, will the mc be all save the slaves? Because id be all for a "villianous" mc saving the slaves, killing the caribou, and being dr doom about integrating them into his new empire. Like I feel like an anti-villian type mc with overlord powers would be so cool. I also feel like as someone from modern earth thats not a total trash human, theres gotta be some rage at the whole injustice of it all. Rage at the situation driving the mc to fix it brutally is honestly very satisfying and we rarely see much of it these days in fanfics