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While I am a little bit disappointed in the lack of sea battle, a giant three way fight between Jerry and co., Caribou and sea monsters would be tricky to do well, so I understand. Major progress in the story with all of the Mane Six saved, more or less. It would be too easy if there were no complications, so Twilight being not of sound mind makes sense. Hopefully when Jerry gets home we see how he tries to run a country and has a great big discussion with all of the Elements when they've recovered. Great chapter and love all of the sea monsters.
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We do still have Starlight's town to deal with as well, not to mention Tirek and everything else that is to come.
Was hoping for the appearance of the sea Emperor with its telepathic powers maybe one day still great chapter
Talk about nice timing. Just yesterday I was thinking about when we would be seeing another update for this story.
Now that all of the Mane Six are rescued. All Jerry has to do now is get Twilight in front of the Tree of Harmony to repair her mind. And then destroy Starlight's cult to get Rarity back to normal.
After that, I guess the war with the Caribou will be escalating even further. I'm hoping Jerry is eventually able to utilize Albert's technology to create a few "magic" nukes from those crystals, and drop them on their homeland. Between an attack like that and the viral outbreak they're still dealing with. The morale of the Caribou would be all but shattered at that point.
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thanks, although you were right, a sea battle would be tricky to write. Even more the sea monsters would do more damage to the two sides than anything if I recall from Subnautica.
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you're right on that. There is much moer to come.
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Although the magic nukes thing might not happen for two reasons. One Albert knowing the full extent of the crystals...and two? Well...I doubt Jerry would want to destroy the landscape, since he is trying to 'conquer' Equestira, not destroy it. He does hate wasting things.
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Even just one of those bombs would be enough to deal a serious blow to the caribou's morale. Jerry wouldn't even have to destroy a city. He could detonate it over the capital city or on an uninhabited island in their territory. Then give them an ultimatum saying that if they don't release all of their slaves he'll start targeting their cities next.
Yes Albert is aware of just how dangerous those crystals are. But if he could be convinced that just a display of such a weapon would be psychologically devastating to them. And that said display would not result in the deaths of any caribou. I think he would be inclined to build one and one only.
But this is just my opinion. So if nothing like this occurs that's cool. I'll just kick back and continue to enjoy seeing how you have Jerry and his allies bring down that asshole King. If there is one thing I'm hoping for beyond anything else in this story. It's that you have Dainn's death be as slow and painful as Honest's (from the manga version of Akame ga Kill) was. God knows that bastard and his most loyal followers deserve that and so much more.
Hymn ... im hoping with a near death experience and being saved by jerry twilight ends up with him .... It's just the other 3 princesses aren't really giving him a real chance... it feels like they know he isn't evil but their only putting up with him and albert due to convenience. They blame him for the deaths caused by the virus but truth be told the equestrians are actually lucky they started a controlled virus spread imagine if the uncontrolled virus had hit first they wouldn't of had the amount of antivirus available they did. The other countries like the griffons and other nations that eat fish must be getting wrecked right now with no aid or antivirus.