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Nice to see some of the grim darkness of reality seeping in. Warms my little black heart. Hooray for moral ambiguity!
*chuckle*
eye needs to calm down..i am sure IT knows this saying.. "hero to some, villain to others" and I know your reading it eye of fate.. you may have just set him on the path of dominaton.. also..i'm out of popcorn..gotta pop more
What is that last word?
8150711 Glad you enjoy. But careful... Eyes of Fate might decide to reply to your message.
8153010 I'll give you a hint. By meme song.
8153225 I know why they're trying but the logic on how doesn't seem to follow and I assume the overlord would agree. He's still giving them money even if it's stolen from the ones occupying the nation it shouldn't matter at this point he's like a Privateer. (Privateer's were hired by a monarchy to steal from the enemies of that monarchies IE hired by the british to steal from the spanish.) pirate+mercenary= Privateer
8153217 I really need to rewatch that movie cause I have no idea what's going on.
On pretty much every fic like this that read I have a list of suggestions on plot points or even how to improve power in universe. Can you tell me if any of these are good ideas for your story.
1) generals: Spree or other soldiers are given pseudo overlord armor allowing them to collect life force, this life force would be kept separately and not turned in to minions allowing them to gain the perks of sacrificing for better armor without having to sacrifice live minions.
2) domination vs mind control: I think it would be interesting if his domination spell could overwrite the caribou's mind control I know that full domination would anyway but I mean if he uses the spell for just a second they would be free without being mindless slaves to him.
3) inventors: I've always liked flim and flam and if the domination spell works the overlord could have motorized mounts for his minions I mean there pretty much the only individuals that can make complex magitech in eques.
4) elites: minions trained to control other minions, allowing for groups of minions to last for longer on their own to scout, gather intelligence, gard nether gates, or to dig cave like bases for the overlords nether portals/resistance.
5) mixed minions: I copied my comment from another overlord story
Red/Brown: breaths fire like a dragon and tuff.
Green/Brown: climbs like spider with strong fingers
Brown/Blue: can summon ghostly wolves as steeds/regen from hits.
Red/Green: has flammable gas like a zippleback from how to train your dragon.
Red/Blue: blue fire burns with magic energizing minions and absorbs enemy magic.
Green/Blue: plant magic
6) SUPER CHARGED MINIONS:
Brown: bigger and like the juggernaut will charge into walls to break them and enemies alike.
Reds: walking infernos with the ability to explode and not die from said explosion.
Greens: can cloak groups of still minions.
Blues: magic shields and the ability to raise zombies not just minions.
But dear reader of comments I would like your speculation on these minions If you have a better idea on what they could do please comment and add to the discussion.
8153294 Well, on one hand you are right...but on the other hand he's is technically damaging and stealing from their nation in a sense, and that while the Resistance Heads could use that as a loophole to not fully pay him back for damages he made on their land.
8159447 And as for your suggestion? Me and Riddle talk a bit on those...and while some have merit? Some others won't work. Mostly the pseudo armor of trying to replicate the armor-- and trying to make sure the Minions won't obey anyone else beside Jerry in the case someone decide to overthrow Jerry and have a minion civil war.
Another thing is that the elite minions is, well admittedly? It might work, but the major problem is of two things. Age and time. As well as training, it is possible-- but it's highly doubtful it will happen.
As for the dominaion and mindcontrol? Theres a major problem with that, while in theory it could possibly try to fight the mindcontrol effects, it would largly just override the mindcontrol and replace the it with the overlord domination spell.
And for the mix breeding? Won't work. Mostly because they don't born normally and the magic they used or the magic that makes Minions...aren't actually known, even by Jerry. So thats a moot point.
And as for the inventor parts...well....you don't want to know.
In short they are good and creative, but Riddle brings up a good point in our slight talk. Things have to be monitor, no need to OP Jerry more than usual, eh?
8159568 Understandable but the pseudo armor wouldn't actually allow them to make or control minions it would only let them collect life force and either sacrifice the pure life force for better armor or let them give it to the overlord.
8159606 Well, the thing is, that the game logic wouldn't really allow that. As well as while it may not come up to mind with pseduo armor, there's one thing you forgot. the gaunlet with the gem. It itself allows Jerry to grab lifeforce to get the Hives to give him new minions, so even IF, and thats a big if, Jerry somehow made pseduo armor...it would be useless in gathering lifeforce. Not to mention theres something else that you might possibly forgotten. Harvesting helmet+beetles+Tower Heart able to give said beetles in Dungeon= spamming hours of gaining large hordes of Minions to use.
8159650 True the Harvesting helmet+beetles works for him but this was just an attempt to give spree and a few others the extra damage and regenerative capabilities of his armor honestly I assumed that if you brought that into the story only spree would get the armor and it would only be mentioned once or twice and I think the overlord's gauntlets connected to the tower heart and that's where the life force goes when he collects it spree's armor would act as a battery till the smelter uses the life force. I always assumed that as soon as the overlord gained a orb of life force it would be absorbed by the minion hives and that's why he had to sacrifice live minions that's why I suggested the battery armor.
8159979 Naw, it wouldn't work like that. Especially more with Spree rejecting the added 'boosts' of regenerating and defense on her armor in the earlier chapters. Side, I doubt that the 'pseduo armor' and it working like a battery won't even work. Game logic and all.