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It's very frustrating, watching Jerry muddling through his half assed plans. Watching him be a covert as a brick upside the head. But what is most frustrating of all is the resistance leaders. Perhaps it's the bad grammar and poor spelling but they come across as really inept. A request for better cover from an agent shouldn't be ridiculed so lightly. They are risking their lives to do the most dangerous and import work of any resistance, info gathering. Yet everyone seems to react like he was talking of defecting. I get that Stone is a bitch and a bit of a man hater, but even she should know how important Intel and R&D is. She shouldn't have to be reminded every other chapter. If anything her concern should be keeping her troops supplied and fed. But the only time she ever opens her mouth is to be a bitch to some male or a voice of dissent against the Overlord. It makes her less believable as a charecter.
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why didn't he just roll up his sleeve? i'm pretty sure he could have said "the doctors held the skin but i'm still mostly hairless.
looks
tries
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looked and borrowed
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“Get me to the mines!” As the mindless horse went harder,
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more time off
learned
claimed
Shining Armor's
is pinkie in the crystal empire?
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why do you write end sometimes?
what was the comment i'm confused also an
8169111 *facepalm* I knew I should of scan through them more often. And as for the 'end' part, well...this story has been co-written with another writer.
8169181 I understand ... Well I don't cause i've never co-written anything.
we all should thank my OCD I can't write a sentence without 90% of the words being wrong but for some reason i'm really good at catching the mistakes other people make.
8169056 To be honest, you make a very good point. But with the Resistance fighting for years, as the five heads were literally thrust into leadership as for years, as they weren't used to leading groups, having to be suspicious of everyone, and even losing ground bit by bit as the Caribou Empire know how to fight the Resistance by sending in their infiltrators to destroy the Resistance bases and safe houses. Yes Stone is a less believable character, but again...This is a story about Jerry. not much for some of the side characters.
It would be really fucked up if Stone Hooves was a pink all along, like a really clever and patient one. It was written that they'd go any lengths to even receive a smidgen of praise, what if from day one she'd already been turned before the resistance was even formed?
Work hard till she becomes one of the heads of resistance to attain the highest clearance of information.
Propagate the resistance's growth to gather all of the possible dissenters and free mares.
Await for the time for the resistance to strike with everything they've got.
Just to crush them all at once and get a pat on the head for job well done.
But then suddenly, there's this schmuck calling himself the "Overlord", that is powerful enough and with enough forces to do more damage than the resistance could ever pull. Is apparently immune to the corruption magic of the Caribou and can dish out his own flavor of it, and now he waltzes up into their base and goes "Sup, want some support with funding and supplies?".
He's ruining her present
But that's just a thought, she's been a real bitch and number one instigator for Jerry through the whole way. She's happy to use all of his shit and use him for their means but she's salty as fuck cause she hasn't found a way to kill him after.
fuckin' cunt
Cuando jazmín llegue a la adolescencia, sentirá el miedo