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That sentence is awkward I'd try " They were round and were lighting the slowly dimming waters like a small town would the night.
Id say just 'harder"
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delete the more
that " in a sense" is redundant
more "younger" doesn't work try "younger looking
that "more" doesn't need to be there
ether "in agremant" or "agreeing" would work
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How dare you it's nothing like bioshock, ok just because it has giant hand drills(prawn suits/big daddy drills), a giant armored protector with a little sister(Jerry and jasmine/big daddys and little sisters) and a dystopia where a new factor rots the minds of the inhabitants (charebu mind magic/adam) doesn't mean anything and while it might be true that I forgot the point of this sentence somewhere after the big daddy comparison that also means nothing.
finally someone brought it up I was planning to ask about that. Though If I could make a suggestion I'd love if he found twilight half insane living in the sewers studying dark magic possibly with sombra's horn on a necklace around her neck it would tell her sutch dark secrets.
This could be useful historically knights would wear very thick fabrics so that there metal suits wouldn't chafe them and in case of blunt attacks
I'm hoping after he finds twilight that she'll work on a way to reverse the caribou mind magic I see the magic working in such a way that while it tempts ponies to think like the caribou it does not control them so even if the overlord destroys the crystal heart the masses wouldn't instantly turn on the caribou just the ones who were already turned wont be nearly as likely to turn.
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I wasn't even steering towards that idea
I was more steering towards, what IF they came across a big daddy, hell even Rapture City; if Subnatica could make it why not this too(if the author chooses to)
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You have to admit the comparison can be made and While I'd love some remnants of rapture it would require a lot of time to flush out the idea properly. What's your thoughts on a blue mount being mesmers think about it like a reverse mount while on land the blue would carry the mesmer and keep it alive with its powers and while the mesmere hypnotises the enemies possibly with a longer range than normal while added by a hoard spell or an explosion if the overlord uses the minion explosion spell from the second game?
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That would just be a bloodbaths and way overpowered , but in doing so they would push the caribou into a corner, and in doing so make them act out of desperation that could lead to the overlord demise.
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That part about them in a corner probably wouldn't be because of the fish considering that if there going to be defeated eventually then they'll be in the corner no matter what and the fact that a few minions with fish that could only stop a single enemy at a time each unless magic boosted probably really be the turning point in the war that would probably be the minion prawn suit.
really overpowered idea's
#1 a minion prawn suit
It would be a regular prawn suite outfitted with a large giant honeycomb patterned backpack full of cubbies for minions the tallest cubbies would be the red minions so that they could shoot over the suits head, browns would be at the sides to protect its vulnerable bits from melee attackers, greens would be on the back of the pack so they could jump on the backs of anything dumb enough to try a sneak attack, and blues could be in the hollow middle so that they can grab any minions who were shot down without leaving the main body and protection of the pack.
what do you think both about the messmers only being limited to one target at a time like in the game and the minion suit?
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I don't know much about the messmers but the pronsuit would help prevent the minions from drowning like the idiots they are but the having to maintain them would be a pain, may be just give them rebreather and a pair of foot fins.
Also I never played Subnatica so my knowledge on it is pretty small
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The suit wouldn't be underwater and they wouldn't be inside the suit the overlord would be inside the suit while the minions use the suits backpack that I mentioned as a base and the prawn suit is this.vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/subnautica/images/a/ac/20160623184429_1.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20160623202937