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Wow! This is got to be one of the most brilliantly done "Fall of Equestria" stories I've ever read.
Normally any story I read involving the caribou. I just hope that whoever the hero is he goes full Dalek on them and just exterminates every last one of them. That being said, I love the way you taken the gray approach to things showing that are always exceptions in any group of people, and while I know Jerry and the princesses will not allow the caribou to be completely wiped out by the virus. I am hoping that by the time the cure gets to their homeland most of them will be beyond saving. I know that sounds cruel but every time I try to feel bad for them. I keep thinking about what almost happened to Jasmine and all the other fillies that weren't saved and that pretty much kills any sympathy I have for all caribou.
Another thing I'm really enjoying about this is how you've handle the development of the relationship between Jerry and Shadow. From their first meeting all the way to them now essentially being married. Every moment that we saw their bond grow and evolve over the course of this story was a treat to read and didn't feel forced in any way.
Now let's see how well the raid goes. Here's to hoping they are able to rescue Twilight and the girls without there being too many complications. Also, speaking of the Mane Six. Will Jerry eventually become close to any of them or will his relationship with them be strictly business like it is with the rest of the resistance?