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Just discovered this story and loving it. Huge fan of the games and love Lawful Evil characters keep up the splendid work.
8120093 Wait...do you mean Jerry being Lawful Evil? *thinks* huh...in a sense he is, I honestly thought he was Chaotic Good in a sense.
And thanks, to be honest I'm still expecting the 'OMG this is terrible, this isn't part of this, or that' comments who might think this story is terrible for not being up the 'expectations' of a FoE story.
I think jerry is like an anti-hero. Not really a villain of evil but the villain for the greater good. It is still evil for it uses unlawful things and methods unlike a hero. So as long as he does not become entirely heroic in a sense of sparing a another villain then he is still the bad guy.
Like the difference from batman and that other guy who actually hunts and kills criminals unlike bat who just beats them senseless.
8120632 Although granted he does control a entire horde of Minions , so technically he is both a anti-hero and a Lawful Evil at the same time. Mostly because, well...hes in a complicated spot after all.
I'm telling y'all right now, while reading Dr. Kalvarn's dialogue, I was reading it in Morgan Freeman's voice.
BTW, this was one of the longest Foe stories I've read in a while. As a gift to your talent I leave you a quote: to be loved by his subjects, feared by his enemies and respected by his allies. What more could a true ruler ask for?
8120320 as for the not holding up to the expectations of foe this is reclamation story and there is a whole bunch of them out of there so I think most that don't like it have learned of this genre by now and avoid it if they don't want it
Kemp up the good work
8121587 Thank you, to be honest I was a bit concern when I brought this story out, mostly because some people may assume it was a sort of Displace story or human being villain story added with FoE.
8121344 *chuckle* thanks, not to mention....this isn't even the halfway mark of the story.
Are they trying to find a way to not pay him back the gold he raided? He still gave them the gold why would it mater where it came from, how is that a loophole?
8152164 Because to them, they would be in massive debt, debt they are unsure of how to payback as for all they know? Jerry could demand high and near insane demands of paying back, maybe even adding a large interest as they will be unable to say no due to them being unable to stop him if he does conquer Equestria.
Oh God Jerry has to become the most evil thing in existence... A POLITICIAN! RUN FOR YOUR LIVELIHOODS. true evil right there. Also I feel Jerry is more of a anti-villian rather than an anti-hero or true villian.
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Well, if one has to be evil, then one needs to learn the art of BS of a politician...although I won't say too much...but in a way, you're right....ish.
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I'm sorry...I just can't read anymore.
Is English your first language?
Why is this supposed "overlord" bending to practically everything demanded of him?
Why has he allowed such disrespect, granted that anyone should be nervous about accepting a deal with a Overlord, to continue?
And why have you still not gotten a editor yet?
I can make out what the sentences are but only just, and that's because I have a brother with dyslexia.
Okay, if you get an editor, this could become amazing. As it is, it has too many really weird sentences, mistakes, and formatting issues.
Good old Lawful Evil vs Chaotic Evil!
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Pretty much.