Stress is caused by being 'here' but wanting to be 'there'. -Eckhart Tolle
Scootaloo was all alone in Ponyville without a pony to look up to. Rainbow Dash was finally apart of the Wonderbolts, and Scootaloo... Well, lets say she wasn't happy anymore.
Rainbow Dash noticed it right from the start, Scootaloo was slowly stopping her letters. Rainbow Dash decides she should give Scootaloo the truth.
... But its going to hurt Rainbow...
This is a one-shot, its been in my head for a while, so I wanted to get it out! Enjoy!!!!
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That was awesome
5496522 Thank you, so, so much!
That was a good story!
Aaaaaaaawwwwww socuteI'mgoingtodiebecauseIloveScootalooandRainbowDashsisficsandIcant...no more omigosh Daw meter re-exploded because I read another cute Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo story and I didnt know I could feel anymore
I was wrong
5541389 Seeing your comment... Just THANK YOU! I don't know how to repay you! BUT THANK YOU!!! I'll be smiling for the rest of the month because of that!!
The only bit of critique I feel I should give, besides a bit of grammar and whatnot, is that if you're gonna do first person, you should keep the story in the point of view of the same character. I understand it'd be hard to do that for two characters in first person, so that's why you do it in third. It's much easier that way.
ITS SO ADORBS
5592712 Thank you a lot for this advice, I'll totally use it in the future!
5793482 Heh, heh, Thank you! I'm thinking of making a sequel one day, not any time soon, that involves Soarin ;D
5794874 *victory punches air* Heckle yess.... I should be in bed now seen as it's almost 5 or almost 6 AM in the uk (My clock says 4:57 ANS my kindle clock says 05:53)