Spike and Fluttershy accidentally end up on a pirate ship and embark a high-seas adventure to the mysterious Blacklands! Join Spike as he and his friends discover uncharted lands and go on a quest to destroy an ancient dark power before it awakens!
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I figured Butch needed to grow a little, and Fluttershy wasn't really getting a lot of screen-time, so I figured I'd give her character a little boost.
7205247 underneath that timid personality is a lot of pent up frustration
...I have a lot of catching up to do don't I?
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Yes... yes you do. Welcome to the party, man!
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Also, don't be afraid to voice your opinion and provide feedback. I love to hear from my readers!
7206798 Well the only thing negative I have about this is the chapters are... short.
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Yeah, that's kind of my thing, sorry. I usually keep them between 2500 and 5000 words so that my story has an episodic feel to it. That's the style I've grown accustom to over the years. But that's still sound advice nonetheless, and my word average per chapter has grown from when I first started. Sometimes I make a chapter longer because I find the content to be more important in terms of story and character development. Thanks for your input, man. I'll try and make better chapters as the story develops!
Also, how far have you gotten? I'd like to hear your opinions on the OC's I've created, as they really glue the story together in my opinion.
7207542 Well so far i've read about 3-4 chapters. I would read more, but school has been causing problems as of late. (homework). I'll give you my more detailed opinion on them later. But, so far I like them!
And I understand you like this writing style. Similar to that I prefer 3rd person over 1st person, so I won't make you change it if you like doing it.
Godspeed my friend!
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Yeah, school has got me in a jam as well-- sucks really. I look forward to hearing what you have to say as you delve further into the Blacklands!
Could Nick join the crew.
You know, i could easily have imagined Gar Nichts being in a Gossamer type situation. like