Spike and Fluttershy accidentally end up on a pirate ship and embark a high-seas adventure to the mysterious Blacklands! Join Spike as he and his friends discover uncharted lands and go on a quest to destroy an ancient dark power before it awakens!
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why do I get the feeling that the "dragons" that attacked his village were secretly changelings that wanted to give their public a reason to exterminate the dragons by pretending it was a war the dragons started...
Okay, lets see where this goes ends up.
Alright, I'm sipping this here. The premise of the story seems great, my only issue and the biggest one I've seen that makes me dislike this story, is it's pacing, so far everything has happened quickly, without lead in, and without explanation. Another issue is that how did that guy know their names? They never gave them to the shopkeeper and he never said it to the warrior guy.
So in short, I'm stopping in this story because it's too hard to read it and enjoy it. If it's quality improves later on, let me know and I might get back to it and see how it develops
I agree with zdaysavior on this, the pacing is much too quick but everything else looks fitting so far
Hmm. I fell like Twilight would have bested him in a fight, but then again, she hadn't slept in a few days. Meh, maybe its just me.